Blackberry-picking
Inspired by the act and Seamus Heaney
Summer is on the wane and harvest is on the rise;
Nights shorten, hinting of coziness and fire,
And pumpkins and their
Glowing orange spiciness.
My father's garden is bursting
With produce and the snaking prickles
Of the blackberry bushes bully
Through the foliage and flowers:
"Look at me!" they say,
"I am here too!" But they hurt
And scratch and are ignored
Like irritating friends
Until now.
Now, they have something to offer,
A sensual experience.
Bulbous, juicy bumps, joined
In a ball; little tufts of hair
Between each mound, fecund and plump.
Their blackness is their attractiveness,
A dark signal, to be plucked;
Once avoided, the dark orbs,
Draw the hand into the briar
Glistening, tempting with their dew sparkles,
Like deeply discovered jewels.
They are worth the snag of injury
From the grasping tendrils of their keeper.
As I gather, I philosophise:
Life is like a bramble thicket,
Prickly, seemingly impenetrable,
The promise of something better
Glimpsed through the thorns.
The reward is there for the taking
If only we can navigate the hurt and trouble.
Nurse the scratches, remove the remnants
And reach for the fruit!
My tub is filling as I search and scramble.
Change the angle
To reveal another cluster;
Again, like life - the way you look at things
Can uncover much; a better view.
I know a poem by an Irishman
But couldn't remember it clearly.
The brambles drew me to it,
To remind myself of his words.
Heaney's poem surprises me;
A shocking ending of blackberries
Turned bad.
I want better for mine.
I have gathered them to me.
I want to transform them,
Like a fairy tale ending.
I will appreciate them before
They gain woolly jackets
Or lose their form in mush.
I will sweeten mine,
Luxuriate them with heat
And savour them:
I will preserve their essence
And enjoy them beyond this day
The blackberries I picked.
About the Creator
Rachel Deeming
Mum, blogger, crafter, reviewer, writer, traveller: I love to write and I am not limited by form. Here, you will find stories, articles, opinion pieces, poems, all of which reflect me: who I am, what I love, what I feel, how I view things.
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Comments (5)
Brilliantly written!!! Especially loved your line, "Life is like a bramble thicket," Love this!!!❤️❤️💕
Excellent, Rachel! I felt as though I was there with you.
The philosofical twist caught me off guard. I'm liking how you pen your poems!
I love this, and missed it when it was first published, thank you for sharing
This was beautifully worded, thank you for sharing!