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Some Things You Should Know

By J. Delaney-HowePublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Before You Go
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Before you go

And journey on to what comes after

There are some things you should know

Like how I will always remember the good times and laughter

*****

You loved us, just as we are

Bad decisions, mistakes and flaws

You made us realize that we could go far

No matter how many times we start or pause

*****

Your dedication to our family

Taught us “Family First”

All we have is family

For better and for worse

*****

Christmas was always merry and bright

Your hard work made it so

Cookies, baked goods, and decorations just right

At Christmas time you always had a glow

*****

I remember our late night Super Mario Brother’s games

Playing all night ‘til dawn

Nintendo was to blame

For the following day’s yawns

*****

I remember some of the bad times too

When Dad would be in a rage

Those sins were not yours, you were just trying to get through

You also shoulder no blame

*****

The love you have for your grandchildren

Each and everyone

With hugs and love for all of them

And making Gramma’s house fun

*****

I wanted to tell you thank you

For all of this and more

Take these memories with you

And let your spirit soar

This poem is was written for my mother, who has incurable brain cancer.

Thank you for reading my work! If you would like to read more, you can click my profile below. I appreciate every read!

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About the Creator

J. Delaney-Howe

Bipolar poet. Father. Grandfather. Husband. Gay man. I write poetry, prose, some fiction and a good bit about family. Thank you for stopping by.

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  • Oneg In The Arctic3 months ago

    Not only did she soar, she contributed to a family soaring. And now she watches as you soar. She sounds like she was wonderful.

  • Denise E Lindquist10 months ago

    Loved this😊💕🌹

  • Judey Kalchik 10 months ago

    Stopped by to read this again and honor your mom.

  • Ashley Lima10 months ago

    Oh, how beautiful but heartbreaking. I'm so very sorry

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Beautiful, sending much love to you and your family at this time ❤️

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Beautiful tribute! 🥰

  • JoAnn Ryanabout a year ago

    Lovely. Sorry to hear about your mother. 😢

  • Sending hugs and support for this Jim

  • Emily Marie Concannonabout a year ago

    Heartfelt and touching ! Really moved me. I just subscribed to you!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful, heartfelt piece. My thoughts are with you.

  • sleepy draftsabout a year ago

    Beautiful. I am so sorry your family is going through this. 💗

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Absolutely beautiful...

  • Thayrileabout a year ago

    Heartfelt 😔

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Heartfelt, tender, touching!!! Love it💕😊💖

  • Dawn Saloisabout a year ago

    This is a very touching poem, Jim. Thank you for sharing.

  • Judey Kalchik about a year ago

    I am positive that your mom knows the words and love in your heart, and I'm so glad that you put some of them into print.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    This is so beautiful and evokes so many emotions. Moms are true angels and your love and respect for her shows here. Great job speaking from your heart. I’m sure your mom loves it. ❤️

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    This is too beautiful for words - a lovely tribute. 💕

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