I grew tired of waiting for your love
I have waited for you ever since
Ever since forsaken
I grew tired of waiting for me in you
I waited for me ever since
Ever since a time
I was you
Long I waited for my love
Long I waited for you
I waited for so long
Since the time
We were one
I waited for so long
I grew tired of waiting
I grew tired of waiting for me
I grew tired of waiting for you in me
Then under the clouds and out of the blue
We meet again on a rainy springtime afternoon
Moonflowers waving on your curly dark hair
An ancient absolution whispered by your lips
Invites the devil in me to fall again for the angel in you
Winner's Circle: Prompted #3
INTRODUCTION Prompted: #3 is over and done with. There were a total of 7 entries for this challenge, just like with Prompted #2. That was a bit surprising, considering this was a poetry challenge. The first poetry challenge garnered much more attention. Of course, one way to look at the drop in participation is that Vocal writers are not fans of the rondel.
By Randy Baker2 days ago in Writers
Comments (1)
Rui, this was a really nice poem! I liked the repetitive language you used, it helped bring your point across and show a sense of finality in your words. Making the point that you're tired of waiting for the other person! Good work, Rui!