I don't think I'll stop seeing the stars in your eyes,
I don't think your smile will brighten my day,
I don't think your laughter will ever stop making me happy...
When will I stop thinking you're perfect for me?
I gave everything for you but you didn't
I've always thought of you, but it's not too late now, is it?
Your smile will always be my favorite
And your eyes will remain unmatched forever
You were my first love and no one will take that from you.
These lines were written by me when I was 15 years old ..... now I may not feel them completely, but that's how I am. If I have a problem I like to write this, I download it much easier. All my poems have a sentimental value that represents my past
About the Creator
Karla Andrea
I like to write poems when I'm sad.
I'm shy when it comes to my writing.
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