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A Rocky Legacy

by Heather Hubler 15 days ago in nature poetry
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a mountain haiku

Micah, quartz, feldspar,

Mountain womb's ultimate brood;

Barren now, like me.

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Heather Hubler

Coffee/reading/writing/family–my favorite things in life. I have a degree in biochemistry but my split personality loves creative writing just as much!

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  • Thavien Yliaster11 days ago

    Mineral Crystals Grown within the Earth's own Womb Harvested by Man *** Ingest needed salts Forming a body within A Mom filled with Life *** The due date is here Remove the baby from her Traumatic feelings *** A belly grown big A mountainous mound of flesh She'll be barren soon *** A womb's a mountain Both contain something precious Both will be emptied

  • Gina C.12 days ago

    This was so earthy and powerful. I love the "mountain womb" - wow. Also, the incorporation of the minerals had me like 😍 yes!

  • Subhi Najar12 days ago

    love it!!!!

  • U.Rdiya14 days ago

    The last line makes you stop, to actually think and re-read the poem. love it!!

  • Kaliyah Myers14 days ago

    This was incredibly engaging, mentally. Thank you for sharing it! It was such an interesting twist on the challenge and so nice! 🥰

  • 😮 wow. This is incredible

  • Michele Jones14 days ago

    So true. Makes you think.

  • Gal Mux14 days ago

    Oh...very thought-provoking. Wow!

  • K’Lee P.15 days ago

    I loved this. It made my heart ache in a good way❤️

  • Morgana Miller15 days ago

    Wow! Stunning and impactful.

  • sleepy drafts15 days ago

    This is so beautiful and personal. Thank you for writing and sharing this❤️

  • Babs Iverson15 days ago

    Awesome!!! Love it!!!

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