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A manifest meeting

earth, water, air

By Heather HublerPublished 25 days ago 1 min read
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Near, though not touching,

Flirting the space in between–

Earth and gauzy sky.

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Written for the Quadru-haiku challenge.

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Heather Hubler

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  • sleepy drafts18 days ago

    Oh, this is so, so beautiful. ❤️ Every word is perfectly chosen.

  • Lamar Wiggins19 days ago

    Clever! This connects so well. I love nature poetry!

  • Flirting the space inbetween🥹🥰🫠

  • I agree with Everyone 🥰❤️❤️‍🔥💋🎯🙏

  • Scott Wade22 days ago

    Ahhh. That moment at sunrise or sunset ❤️

  • C. H. Richard23 days ago

    Makes me think of how all the element connect "though not touching." Beautiful

  • Keila Aartila23 days ago

    Gorgeous! :)

  • Jason Basaraba24 days ago

    This one made me feel.

  • Gina C.24 days ago

    I cant’ decide which like I like best.. all so beautiful and significant. The middle line is ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 but I’m in love with your term “gauzy sky” 😍😍

  • Really, excellent Haiku

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  • Daniel Jeyaraman24 days ago

    Brilliantly written, Heather. ❤

  • Cathy holmes24 days ago

    This is so well done written, I would see mist without even looking at the pic. Perfect.

  • Babs Iverson25 days ago

    Super fantastic!!!💕💖😊

  • Poppy the Poet25 days ago

    Your poems never disappoint. Each one is awesome!

  • Not touching but flirting. That was so brilliant! Loved it!

  • Perfectly ethereal , beautiful words

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