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A Little Leeway, Please

Smart watch goes too far.

By PK ColleranPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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A Little Leeway, Please
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"Ping!" Time for you to

"Ping!" walk, "Ping!" stretch, 3,000

"ping" steps to go. "Ping!"

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About the Creator

PK Colleran

I love words and their power to enrich our lives.

Editor of bilingual poetry collection Landscape of the Soul by Hipólito Sánchez, published by Cafh Foundation.

Translator of Living Consciously and Words Matter, by Jorge Waxemberg.

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  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    It's like being on a very short leash.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    This was both fun and irritating - like those watches - not suggesting your poem is irritating, just that it conjured those feelings! Well done!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fun!!! Love it!!!💕💖

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Lol. Shut up, watch. This is great

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    🤣🤣. This made me laugh. I get so annoyed at my watch when it tells me “Time to stand!” …like come on, you can read my life signs, can’t you tell I need to keep sitting right now?

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