A happy home
One filled with people, pets and many a shenanigan
I walked downstairs this early morning
And could barely find a place to plant my feet
I stopped and looked around
There were people sleeping everywhere
On couches, on the floor, blankets were flung askew
The beds were all taken, filled to capacity
I stopped and pondered how years ago
When times were a little bit harder
At someone's house I had to borrow a bed
While trying my best to land a job
To become independent with a little place of my own
"Too many bodies in the house was said,
Some will now have to go"!
I packed up my life and asked for help from another
Thankfully, a job was found and an apartment procured
There were struggles, but we are now in a much better state
I give thanks for the help which was rendered in the past
Thank you everyone for keeping me housed no matter what
The time, circumstance or offering which your heart could render
I was never homeless, hungry much nor gave up in despair
My heart returns to the overfilled house that I now survey
I would not want a better blessing on my life
Than a house filled to capacity with friends and family
Warring children, yelling at each other playing angry games
Teenagers doing secret things they think adults do not know
Adults in close proximity, yet meeting each struggle with a smile
Sometimes a groan, or a worried thought about life's many crosses
Though there are little annoyances, we are human after all
When you get right down to the meat of it all
The fuller the home
The happier the heart
The greater the blessing on a life!
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This was a really beautiful piece! It brought to mind that saying "It take a village to raise a child". I felt very moved and inspired by this piece, I can feel the passion and raw emotion you put into this piece! So touching! 💜
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