Poets logo

A happy home

One filled with people, pets and many a shenanigan

By Novel AllenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
4
A happy home
Photo by Valentina Locatelli on Unsplash

I walked downstairs this early morning

And could barely find a place to plant my feet

I stopped and looked around

There were people sleeping everywhere

On couches, on the floor, blankets were flung askew

The beds were all taken, filled to capacity

I stopped and pondered how years ago

When times were a little bit harder

At someone's house I had to borrow a bed

While trying my best to land a job

To become independent with a little place of my own

"Too many bodies in the house was said,

Some will now have to go"!

I packed up my life and asked for help from another

Thankfully, a job was found and an apartment procured

There were struggles, but we are now in a much better state

I give thanks for the help which was rendered in the past

Thank you everyone for keeping me housed no matter what

The time, circumstance or offering which your heart could render

I was never homeless, hungry much nor gave up in despair

My heart returns to the overfilled house that I now survey

I would not want a better blessing on my life

Than a house filled to capacity with friends and family

Warring children, yelling at each other playing angry games

Teenagers doing secret things they think adults do not know

Adults in close proximity, yet meeting each struggle with a smile

Sometimes a groan, or a worried thought about life's many crosses

Though there are little annoyances, we are human after all

When you get right down to the meat of it all

The fuller the home

The happier the heart

The greater the blessing on a life!

By Rowan Heuvel on Unsplash

......................................................................................................................

performance poetryinspirationalhumanityvaluesextended familychildren
4

About the Creator

Novel Allen

Every new day is a blank slate. Write something new.

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Expert insights and opinions

    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  3. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  4. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  5. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

Add your insights

Comments (3)

Sign in to comment
  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Loving caring and heartwarming!!! Love this!!!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    This was a really beautiful piece! It brought to mind that saying "It take a village to raise a child". I felt very moved and inspired by this piece, I can feel the passion and raw emotion you put into this piece! So touching! 💜

  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    This heartwarming poem speaks to the power of community and the joy...💗💗💗 to read....

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.