The Hotel California
Such a lovely place, such a lovely place
The cabin in the woods had been abandoned for years, but one night, a candle burned in the window.
Tommy hurried along the worn path, he was late, and his mom didn't like tardiness. The grocer had ignored him to feed the bottled beer to the miners after their shift.
Through the trees, the sky blackened, and thunder rumbled like the cannon of a battle over the next hill. A rush of wind rustled the trees and whipped their branches into animated life. The arms appeared like warnings to stop, go back. The path before him faded as the light failed until a lightning bolt illuminated the cabin above him and to the right. An explosion of thunder followed, and a deluge of water flooded through the forest and soaked him. The accumulated downpour raged down the trail and flooded his shoes.
The sky lit white again, and the cabin silhouetted against the black hill, and he turned towards the shack to seek shelter. He slogged the last few feet and stopped when the candle like a sailor's beacon in the window, appeared inviting or a warning of danger. The trees danced in another onslaught of high wind as debris sailed through the air. Fearful, he pushed forward the last steps onto the porch and found some relief from the downpour.
He knocked on the door, and the flimsy entry eased open an inch. Though hesitant, he pushed the door harder, and it creaked like an old wood ship as it opened.
"Hello, is anyone here?" he said.
After a moment, he stepped through the door, and a massive, spiraled web slapped him. Tommy dropped his bag and pawed the sticky trap off his face. A cloud of delicate gold dust filled the air, and he inhaled the foreign substance and choked. An onlooker would think the young boy a Texas Two-Step pro when adrenaline flooded his veins and fought the phantom attack. He hated spiders.
The one-room cabin appeared abandoned, with a table and chair centered, a single bed by the wall, and a candle in the window. Lightning and thunder crashed as the storm's intensity increased, but the cabin stood fast and remained dry. Tommy stumbled like a drunk, took the candle from the window, and inspected the bed. The single wood frame bed appeared clean and sturdy, so he sat and peeled his wet coat and water-laden shoes off and laid back on the bed. Exhausted, he slipped into a deep, gold dust induced, sleep and dreamed of being home.
Unaware of how much time had passed, he awoke to the sound of music and jumped up. His eyesight grew dim and narrow as if black curtains closed over them, and he fainted back to the bed.
"The song, what is the tune? It plays on my mom's favorite radio station."
The volume rose and the lyrics became clearer.
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Welcome to the Hotel California
Such a lovely place (such a lovely place)
Such a lovely face
Plenty of room at the Hotel California
Any time of year (any time of year)
You can find it here
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His eyes weighed heavy from the exertion, and his neck itched, so he scratched the skin. His fingers' touch sent a painful shock to his spine and brain.
"Ouch, What the hell," he said and drew his hand back with fingers red with fresh blood.
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So I called up the Captain
Please bring me my wine
He said, 'We haven't had that spirit here"
"Since 1969"
And still those voices are calling from far away
Wake you up in the middle of the night
Just to hear them say
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Tommy picked up the candle and examined his feet. He screamed. Pinhead sized spots of blood covered his hands, arms, and feet like someone had pricked him with a hundred needles. Dozens of black and red spiders the antithesis of lady bugs scurried across the bed and disappeared into rustic walls.
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Welcome to the Hotel California
Such a lovely place (such a lovely place)
Such a lovely face
Plenty of room at the Hotel California
Any time of year (any time of year)
You can find it here
___
Movement above him beyond the shadows of the flame drew his attention, and hundreds of green-eyed black spiders glared at him like starved wolves of winter. The hairy-legged, half-dollar-sized creatures, agitated by the scent of blood circled like vultures in concert around the ceiling.
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Mirrors on the ceiling
The pink champagne on ice
And she said, 'We are all just prisoners here"
"Of our own device"
And in the master's chambers
They gathered for the feast
They stab it with their steely knives
But they just can't kill the beast
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"I've got to get out of here," he said and attempted to stand again and fell to the floor. The music played louder.
Tommy, unnaturally weak, struggled to move towards the door. A gray and white spiny spider, the size of a peach, clicked across the floor and stopped at his left wrist.
Determined to smash the invader, Tommy raised his right hand, but his arm flopped limply across his stomach in rebellion. The Arachnid's cold ebony eyes stared into him as two long white fangs slipped into the veins, and the helpless boy's body went numb as the injection paralyzed him. The queen sucked out the first offering until her once gray furry fangs withdrew a deep blood red.
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There she stood in the doorway
I heard the mission bell
And I was thinking to myself
This could be Heaven or this could be Hell
Then she lit up a candle
And she showed me the way
There were voices down the corridor
I thought I heard them say
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Welcome to the Hotel California
Such a lovely place (such a lovely place)
Such a lovely face
Plenty of room at the Hotel California
Any time of year (any time of year)
You can find it here
___
Helpless, Tommy's eyes flicked back and forth as the hundreds of black spiders clicked their way off the ceiling to the floor. The green-eyed vampires crawled on his body until they covered his hands, arms, face, feet and legs. His sight faded, and tears leaked from the corners of his eyes and dripped down his cheeks. "Mother, please help me!" echoed in desperation through his mind as a thousand fangs sank into his flesh and as slow as a candle burns sucked the blood of life from him. The music continued to play.
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Last thing I remember, I was
Running for the door
I had to find the passage back
To the place I was before
"Relax," said the night man
"We are programmed to receive"
"You can check-out any time you like"
"But you can never leave."
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The candle lost its form to a mass of burnt wick and wax, as did the light in Tommy's eyes and shriveled body. Soon, they both flickered out and the abandoned cabin preserved his bones and skin. The spider trap cabin faded with its song into the dark of the forest to await its next victim.
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Welcome to the Hotel California
Such a lovely place (such a lovely place)
Such a lovely face
Plenty of room at the Hotel California
Any time of year (any time of year)
You can find it here
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Writing credits for the song are shared by Don Felder (music), Don Henley, and Glenn Frey (lyrics). Joe Walsh came up with the dual-guitar descending ...
About the Creator
J. S. Wade
Since reading Tolkien in Middle school, I have been fascinated with creating, reading, and hearing art through story’s and music. I am a perpetual student of writing and life.
J. S. Wade owns all work contained here.
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Comments (16)
I will never listen to that song the same anymore
Very clever...and watch your italics with the last two sections of lyrics. We really are all prisoners here of our own devise...
Keep up the good work. Good day.
Creepy!!
Ooh, is this ever creepy! Excellent work.
This was a really nice story
omg the spiders!! YIKES! Great job Scott. Really well done,
No words, just applause. 💛
You got my vote for the top prize. Great writing.
I guess I'll be taking Hotel California off my playlist. Great job on this story.
I'm never going to listen to that song the same way again! This is real horror, taking something safe and familiar and twisting it all tae f***. My skin prickles all over right now and I feel very uncomfortable. Well done!
Wow! So great Wade! Uhm, you know, I think you'd give Steven King a run for his money, you've got a gift and a way about your written voice that moves me. Thanks for this treasure!
This was super creepy! Thank God it wasn't cockroaches. I couldn't have finished your story if that was the case lol.
Brilliantly written and well thought out. I love how you used the song lyrics to tell your story.
Bravo!!! Brilliant storytelling!!!
this is great. love it. love the song too.