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by Dachelle Dimkpa 10 months ago in fiction · updated 10 months ago
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A sense of relief

“Hello” I held the phone to my ear while I tried to finish painting my toenails.

“Hey girl, "I knew the voice. It was from my best friend, Vanessa.

“Hey.” I was trying to focus on my pinky toe.

“Are you ready because I’m fifteen minutes away, and the plane leaves in an hour?”

“Um, if my toes dry in fifteen minutes, then I’ll be ready.”

“Then hurry your ass, bye” Vanessa hated when I wasn’t ready, but I will never be ready on time.

I was excited that we were going to Hawaii, although Vanessa planned to get me out of the house. Ten minutes later I heard her unlocking the door.

“You ready now?” she yelled.

I slipped on my flip flops, put my flimsy sun hat on, and ran downstairs to grab my bags so we could catch our flight.

Our rooms were outstanding; they faced the beach. Vanessa wanted separate rooms because she plans on getting her groove, yet our rooms were right next to each other. I’m going to be able to hear everything and next time I’m choosing the rooms. The sunset was even better as I unpacked my bag, hanging my clothes in the closet. We were going to be here for about a week. It would be two full weeks, but Vanessa and I had to get back to our Real Estate jobs to wrap up the closing on the Alexander's new home.

“I’m going to the club, you coming with me?” Vanessa peaked in my room as she interrupted my thought and reminded me to keep the door locked.

“Not tonight; I am going to chill out at the bar down by the beach.”

“Okay, try not to get too drunk, and if you do, call me before you go anywhere else.”

“I want you to do the same, Nessa,” I said, getting ready to take a quick shower.

I sat at the bar for about 10 minutes before I ordered a long island iced tea. The bartender was a female, and her name was Jen.

“What are you doing out here by yourself?” She said,

“I just wanted to relax and view the beach.”

“I understand. Sometimes people just want to be alone. Well, I’m here to talk. I close at 1:00 a.m, so you have 3 and a half-hours.”

“Thanks.” I then turned around to face the beach. Jen started playing soft music.

“It’s nice out here, isn’t it?”

“Yes, it is,” I said, turning around to face this man. He was handsome with refined dreads.

“My name is Axel” He held out his hand with a bright smile.

“The man of peace!” I smiled back at him shaking his hand.

“How did you know?” When he stared into my eyes, I thought I was going to melt in his hands.

“I know my names, and by the way, I’m Jesse.'' It seemed like people came out of nowhere as they crowded the space, music now loud.

“I can’t hear you!” Axel yelled.

I leaned towards him touching his arm without noticing it. “My name is Jesse.”

He turned to Jen. “Can I get two Screwdrivers, please.”

Jen smiled at him, did some shaking, and gave us our glasses.

After Jen winked at him, Axel gracefully grabbed my hand,

“You’re coming with me,” he said, grabbing my hand.

I followed. Although I was curious, already tipsy, I didn’t ask where we were going, and I didn’t care. Do you ever go with the flow?

“Take me to your room” He stopped and pulled me into his body; I felt all his warmth. His hands glided across my hips when he bit my lip. A shock, unlike no other, waved through my body.

“Why?” I stared into his brown eyes.

He laughed. “I don’t know; I didn’t expect you to ask why,” he said.

I laughed along with him. “How about you take me to your room instead?” I smiled.

Axel's rented beach house was wonderful: marble tile floors, a hot tub, a spacious kitchen, and palm trees in the living area. Our drinks were gone, and we were all over one another. He picked me up, wrapping my legs around him, and carried me to his bedroom as we exchanged saliva with each step. Axel’s lips were soft, and his hands felt like magic. Axel started kissing my neck while he was squeezing my ass. He worked his way down, taking off my clothes exposing all he desired.

“Your skin is succulent, baby,” he said between nipple slurps. My nipples were getting erect so hard that they throbbed. I didn’t know why my body craved this unknown man; I knew nothing but his name. I didn’t want to ruin the moment, but I had to ask.

Mm…How old are you, handsome? I spoke between moans. I was getting wet, and soon I wasn’t going to be able to speak clear words.

“I’m 34, how about you? His wet tongue slides down to my belly, placing sweet kisses all over.

“I’m 26” he let his long dreads loose, so I pulled them as he dug two fingers in my pussy. “Damn,” closing my eyes as my head fell back.

“Now I can’t wait to taste your sweet nectar” When he looked up and smiled at me, I couldn’t help to show my pearly whites back at him. Then, as his clothes dropped to the floor, I saw his manhood.

“When you cum I want you to let go of stress, and anything outside of these walls, understand?”

“I understand, Axel.”

“Good, girl”

As he spread my legs, his tongue met my clit. He flailed; I couldn’t help it, cumming with such a rush.

“Oh my god, Axel.”

“Mm, you taste good, keep cumming” He said, smacking my ass.

“Yes, yes, yes, I’m cumming” I gripped his hair and rode his face, moving my hips.

His slurps echoed the room, making my clit greet him from hiding. Stress released from within me.

His manhood sent me to the clouds above. A sense of relief as he slides in and out of me. Axel held me tight, as if he was shielding me from pain and suffering.

“Move with me, faster,” He said, rolling over with me now on top.

How many times did I cum? I’m losing count as it recycles. He filled me. My walls surrounded him. My mind didn’t care who this man was inside me. The pleasure overwhelmed me as I dripped down his sac.

I got on my knees to please him.

He pulled me back up. “Tonight is about you,” Kissing my collarbone.

His fingers rubbed my clit as he watched me emerge into bliss. My eyes rolling back as I dripped down my leg; he kisses my lips once more.


“Does it feel good?” Pulling me closer to rub faster.

“Mmhm” I couldn’t speak, not now, not yet.

Axel bit my neck then whispered in my ear, “Speak when spoken too. Does it feel good?”

“Oh, Yes!” I screamed, becoming weak, my legs gave out on me, and he laughed, catching me.

I woke to the sun rising. Axel was gone.

Where’s my phone I thought, immediately thinking about Vanessa

Trying to get up, I managed to roll off the bed, hitting my arm. “Ouch.”

There was nothing on the floor. So where did all my stuff go? I quickly stood up and looked around.

“Hey, You okay?”

I jumped. Axel came from the back dressed in fresh clothes.

“Where’s my phone and my clothes?” wrapping the sheet tighter around me.

“Sit down, and you don’t look so good,” buttoning the last button on his shirt.

“I’m fine,” I said, feeling dizzy.

He disappeared into the back again, returning with the trashcan just in time.

“Where’s my stuff, Axel?” I said between gags.

“I washed your clothes, and your phone is on the charger" He sat next to me. "How are you feeling?”

“I’ll be fine. I need my phone” I had 30 missed calls and 5 voicemails, and 10 messages. Vanessa was freaking out.


“Jesse, Where are you? Are you okay? You never came back to your room,” She said, answering the phone after the first ring.

“I’m fine. I’m at a beach house with a guy I met at the bar named Axel. I’ll be back soon.”

"Girl, send me a pic of this man right now! You got me worried as hell.”

“I need to take a picture of you to send to my friend, Okay?” I said, turning to Axel.

“No need. I’m taking you to your room right now. She can meet me. I understand if you want to stay on the phone.”

“Yes, sir, I’m staying on this phone,” Vanessa, now yelling through the speaker.

“Okay, Nessa. I’m going to take a shower then dress, and we’ll be on our way.”

“This is Axel?” Vanessa said in shock.

“Yes. Axel, this is my best friend, Vanessa. Vanessa, Axel” I smiled.

Vanessa stared like she was star struck. “Damn, You are one hell of a man,” she said, reaching for a handshake.

He laughed. “Thanks” Axel refused her handshake and gave her a nod. “Nice to meet you, Vanessa.”

“Um, okay,” she said as we looked at each other, confused.

“I’m taking you two out for breakfast. Vanessa, Are you ready?” He smiled.

“Uh, Yes I am. Where are we going?” Vanessa glanced at me.

“Back to my place if that’s okay with you ladies? I’ll cook breakfast.”

Vanessa and I eyes met once more. She nodded, and I agreed, feeling the emptiness of my stomach.

Once at Axel’s place he fixed us banana fosters french toast with chicken sausages.

“This was delicious,” I said, sipping the last of my water.

“Thank you. I figured you two were hungry. You need food to maintain energy.”

“I’ll be back. Where’s your bathroom Axel?” Vanessa said.

“In the back to your right.”

I was able to see her go down the hall from the dining table.

“Jesse?” Axel said, rubbing my thigh.


“Your friend wants me, doesn't she?”

“Um” I laughed.

“Don’t she?” His look was serious yet subtle.

“Yeah, I can tell she likes you.”

“Hm, I figured,” He said, getting up.

I watched him go to the closet and take out a bong.

“You two smoke?”

“Hell yeah. You're talking about weed? Because we don’t do other drugs.

He chuckled. “Yeah, weed, marijuana, mary jane, whatever you want to call it.”

Axel handed me the bong. “Take a hit.”

The first hit was smoother than I anticipated. I took another inhale and exhaling slowly, but that cough still snuck me.

“Coughing is good. You got a nice one in,” Axel said.

I watched Axel take a hit as we sat on the couch.

“I didn't know it was that kind of party,” Vanessa yelled, walking into the living room. Immediately Axel handed her the bong.

“Did you take a shit?” I said, laughing.

“No, girl. I--you know” She winked at me like I was supposed to get it.

“No, I don’t know, Nessa.”

She whispered in my ear, “I cleaned up after I peed”

“What y'all whispering about?” Axel said.

I started to feel mellow as I stroked Nessa’s hair. “Nothing”

“Nessa, how old are you?” Axel said, now lighting a blunt that seemed to appear out of thin air.

“Sorry, Axel, but you don’t know me like that to call me Nessa, and I’m 26. I’11 be 27 in two days.”

“I’m trying to get to know you, but I didn't just bring you here for ted talk” Axel stood up and walked over to us.

Towering us, he handed me the blunt, took the bong out of Vannesa’s hand, and sat it on the end table. He bent down, got close to her face to kiss her but as soon as she motioned for their lips to meet, he turned his head and kissed me. His tongue dancing with mine. Our kiss got deeper as he squeezed my right boob. Everything felt like it was going to last forever. Axel sucked my clit as Vanessa sucked and licked my nipples one by one, making them equally hard.

“Mm. This feels amazing.”

“Enjoy it,” Nessa said, kissing her way down.

Her tongue joined Axel's tongue on my clit.

“Oohhh, Lick that shit,” I screamed, dropping the blunt.

Axel snatched the blunt before it left a hole. “Be more careful, baby.”

His exhale clouded his face when he passed Nessa the blunt. Smoke escaped their lips as they shared a kiss.

Her face was now a part of the plush carpet as he lifted her ass in the air. Admiring her pose, I never knew how beautiful she was. She caught me looking and smiled. Then, darting her tongue in the air, she taunted me. We are all searching for that sweet release. This vacation is what we needed.

Copyright © 2021 by Dachelle Dimkpa. All Rights Reserved.


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