Whispers in the Dark
Whispers in the Dark is a short Horror fiction story? about three teenage girls named Kristy, Mia, Raven which was dark and unusual, and Mia's Cousin Brad, Kristy was having a big Halloween Party on all Hallow's Eve. when everyone left to go home it was only the three teenage girls and they were bored now that everyone was gone home. so Raven talked Kristy and Mia into playing a board game, Kristy asked Raven what kind of board game? did Raven say the Ouija bored? Mia did not agree on that but Kristy talked her into it and so Raven set up the candles lit them around the Ouija board and started asking it questions, no answer or was there? now if you want to know more read me.
Chapter One
“It was All Hallows Eve. And a young woman named Mia had her old apartment and a Son and she was asked to Babysit her Brother's Three Kids and take them trickery treating. The kids got Dressed up and so did Mia and her Son she took them
tricker treating in the Rich section. which she knew that they would be four very Happy Kids cause they would get plenty of candy and treats of all kinds.
After she took the four kids all tricker treating, They all four came Back with Full bags of different Goodies. Her Brother came got them and also took her
Son with him they were tired and ready to go to bed. He gave Mia a Big hug and said Thanks, Sis. And she said thank you, and her Brother her Son and his Three kids left to his house. Mia decided will I'm still in Costume so why not go to her friend Big
Halloween Party...?” Mia went to her Friends' Halloween party. Her friend Kristy had a house full. And they got Drunk had a great time but by Midnight came everybody else was gone and there was only Mia, Kristy, Genii,
Lara, Sheena, and their dark and Unusual Friend Raven and Raven want to do something that you really Shouldn't do especially at Midnight on All Hallows Eve. Raven said hey Girls let's play a Board Game...?” Kristy said what Kind of Board Game...?”
Raven said it's called an Ouija Board ever seen one...?” Kristy said No I've never even heard of it...?” Raven said I'll show you do you have candles...?” Kristy said what color Candles...?” Raven said you know them Big thick white Candles...?” Kristy said oh yeah I have plenty of them. Raven said oh Cool go get them..?”
Kristy said OK...?” She did and Raven sits the little living room table and took the Game from her backpack and set it down on the table and lit the Candles around the top of the Ouija Board. Mia said Raven I don't Thank this is a good idea?”
Raven said what you Scared Mia...?” Mia said yes I mean no, of course, don't be silly...?' Raven said OK then what's the problem?” Mia said What if you Conjure up something Not Good..?” Raven giggled you don't
Believe in that Sheeit do you...?” Mia said Maybe...?” Raven said Oh my gosh are you serious...?” Mia said yes as a matter of fact I am. Raven said OK then go...?' Mia said I ain't going nowhere after I've been drinking sorry I do not thank you so. Kristy said No don't go stay please Mia just this once. Mia said Kristy that's all it takes...?” Kristy said please. Mia said Fine whatever but if you do
Conjure up something it better not Miss with me cause this was not My Idea. Raven said OK let us all put our hands on this thing here on the Board …?” They all do.
Raven said OK now is anybody here this Hallows Eve Night that wishes to talk to us or pass a message to someone we know from you...?” at first nothing happened then Raven repeated herself and all of the sudden the thing on the Board moved in a circle just a little. Mia said Raven stop moving it...?” Raven said
Mia, I'm not..?” Mia said did any of you move it...?” They all said No...?” Mia said OK then who moved it...?” It moved again Faster. Mia took her hand from it. And it stopped moving...
Mia said OK I don't like this. Kristy said oh cool Mia put your hand back on it...?” Mia said “NO!” Kristy grabbed her hand put it back on the thing with her's yes. And again after Kristy had put Mia's hand back on it with her's it Moved It wasn't going to move without Mia's hand on it for some reason...?”
Raven said Mia Obviously whoever this wants to talk to you has anyone passed away in your family not too long ago...?” Mia said yeah My cousin Mandy...?” Raven said maybe she wants to get in touch with you ask it a question...?”
Mia said what are you Frekken insane girl...?” Kristy said do it Mia...?” Mia said Fine is this Mandy...?” there you happy now. Right then and there it Moved to “NO!” Mia said No then do I know you...?” the thing Moved to yes...?” Mia said OK then who are you...?” It moved to spell
G..r..e..g..g..?” Mia said it said it's Gregg. Are you a Male or a Female...?” The thing spells out M..a..l..e?” Mia said it's a He sorry Gregg But I don't Know a Gregg...?” The thing spelled out I K..n..o..w.. y..o..u!” Raven said
this Guy Gregg Knows you Mia...?” Mia said but how Have I ever met you...?” It moved to NO! B..u..t I H..a..V..e M..e..t y..o..u!” Mia said Where...?” He said I..N. Y..o..u..r D..r..e..a..m..s..?” Mia said What I don't reamer dreaming about a Guy Named Gregg..?” Kristy said Shh... watch...?” He moved it again I Have long Black hair, The Bright eye's I am Tall
and I am muscular I am the Gothic Guy in your Dreams...?”
Mia took her hands from the Thing again Covering her Mouth with an Oh my god...?” Raven said awe... Girls it looks like Mia's been holding out on us she has a dream man oh and Gothic even...?” so Mia you have a dark and unusual Dream man humph...?” Mia said Oh Hush so what I'm sure you all do too will especially you Raven...?” Raven said will say no to that...?”
Mia said What are you the living dead or something..?” Gregg moves the thing to Yes in My Darkness there is no Sunshine...?” Mia said so you are dead...?” Gregg moves it to Yes and then to No I just feel like I am...?” Raven said I know the feeling man...?” Mia said then
how are you talking to us only dead people can speak to us through this...?” Gregg moved the thing to Not Necessary True Mia, I can do Black Magick I can talk to you however I wish...?” Mia took her hands off the thing yeah OK look girls I've seen enough Imam call my Cousin to come to get me and take me home OK sorry but no more this is way too creepy I'll come back tomorrow
to get my car can I use your Phone Kristy please I need to leave now you have fun but no not me no more OK sorry. Kristy said But...?” Mia said No buts to...please can I just use your phone...?”
Kristy said OK sure Mia you know where it's at. Mia said thank you, Kristy. She went to the phone she had a very bad Creepy feeling in her stomach she was feeling just a little sick now she called up her Cousin Brad and ask him to please come to get her and take her
home …?” he said sure Cuz what's wrong...?” Mia said please just come get me I'm at Kristy's and I've been drinking I'm not feeling very well please just come get me...?” Brad said OK On My way …?” Mia said Thank you,
thank you..?” she hung up made her a Plate to go grabbed her things and by the time she had done that Brad was there to pick her up and she left. On her way to her apartment she was talking to her cousin...?”
Mia asked hey Cuz have you by any chance missed with an Ouija Board before...?” Brad said actually yeah I have and never missed with it again why...?” Mia...?” Mia said oh no reason just thought I'd ask...?”
Brad said OK but an Ouija Board is nothing to Play with you can Conjure things up Like what's in your worse Nightmares girl. Mia said OK Cuz I was just asking...?” Brad said OK we are here have a good rest of the Night...?” Mia said yeah OK you too and be careful Cuz and thanks for coming and getting me...?” Brad said No Problem girl. Mia hugged her cousin told him she loved him and he said he loved her too. Mia
got out of the car walking up to her apartment door waved at Brad he waved back and she takes her Key to Unlock her apartment door she goes in Brad pulls out and left she locks her door the first thing she does is
goes and makes her a Bath with bubbles and she gets in and relaxes with candlelight and a sensual in-since burning in the bathroom Mia was laying in her antique tub with her head upon her Blow up pillow in her Tub. Laying there relaxed in her hot
bubble bath the steam from the water soothed her as it rose around her the candles lit all around the tub and in since burning a sensual smell that smelt of the heavens she closed her eye's just for a second and
took a deep breath breathing gently within. Then she felt as if she was pulled down into the water like someone was Drowning her every time
she'd try coming up she got pulled back down deeper and deeper into the water she panicked when she realized that she keep getting pulled down deeper into the water when she was trying to swim up and the water went down her nose and mouth
feeling her Lungs and Nose and throat with Much water. These hands would take her deeper and deeper into the water she panicked which was not good when every time she'd try and
come up the hands would pull her back down deeper and deeper she'd struggle to fight these hands off her so she could reach the top of the water so she can get some air but the hands wouldn't let her all of a sudden everything went, Black. And quiet almost like she blacked out and she sinks and sunk getting
Closer to Death but for some reason; she woke and she was still sinking deeper and deeper into this was not water no more... it was something very Thick and Black and musty and smelt very harshly should I say realized she
was not in her Bathtub no more...?” Mia was so weak and could Barely move into this Thick Black musty stuff still Naked and it felt like this Thick Musty stuff had a sinkhole in it like sink sand or like a Current pulling her deeper down into This Darkness felt like hands just trying their hardest to Pull her down deeper into this so-called Deep pit and she would fight them off her but there was too many grabbing onto her pulling her down
Chapter Two!
“Like it was a bottomless pit of Doom Mia would Kick and she would Push them and hit them off and try swimming up hoping there was away out of this whatever it was so thick Musty Black and gross yucky Muck hoping she'd soon reach the top but finally she got free and finally reached the top bringing her head up out of this Gross stuff and gasped which only made the smell of it worse and realized it wasn't just
Black Muck but also had white toilet paper and also had misty wetness she looked up covered in this stuff when she saw a Hole with a Dem light she gasped and started Climbing up this Brick or whatever
it was as her Naked body Plopped out of this Mucky stuff she knew she
was then Free from it to reach the top of this hole when she finally put her Black Mucky covered hands up out of this whole with a Dem Light barely but surely pulling herself up and out this Hole and fail to a floor of some kind and all covered in all this yucky gooey stinky Muck with Toilet paper and all over her. Mia hit the floor gasping for Breath and laid there for a bit to rest and calm her Heart From Beating out her Breast it felt she looked and realized it was in
some small Building of some sort cause she looked and saw a door cracked open to this little Building could see just a little moonlight she noticed she was not in her Bathroom no longer. She got up and began to crawl out of this little Building when she heard a whisper in the Dem Building
Mia waits for me...?' Mia looked around who is that what do you want. The deep whisper said over here she turned to Look when she has seen that she had Crawled herself up and out of the pit of an outhouse the whole she came out of had a place to sit on it with a roll of Toilet paper hung up on a Nail waiting to be used she got sick and realized she was in the deep Pitt of an outhouse gagged and up
shocked, and Notice another Pare of big hands all covered in smothered in Muck and Toilet paper and whispered Help me
out...?” The deep voice asked she came back to it to help whoever this was out of there and realized he wasn't just covered in Muck and toilet paper but Leashes too she
jumped back and fell on her ass from him looking at her arms and she too wasn't only covered in Black Muck and Toilet paper but Leashes as well she grabs them and pulls them off one at a time hurt like Hale but she finally got them all off her she got up barely but surely thanks by the help of the wall that had something to grab a hold onto to help you up and she looked back at
the Hole and them big white hands yet covered in Muck's head come out of the hole he was also covered in Muck toilet paper and leashes came crawling up and out of the pit of the outhouse he too was Naked and roped with muscles with long black brads in his long Black hair a deep
Whisper Mia wait for me it's Gr-egg. Mia said Gr-egg....?” she couldn't believe how big and muscular this Gr-egg guy was but yet to see his face his long black brads hung down over his face she felt sick again watching this thick icky black gook dripping down him and the smell was awful enough that made your nose Curl Mia put her hand over her nose which made it no better cause she too was covered in it she said Awe. God it stinks she walked back a little away from him but he
kept crawling tore her she would back off from him and she would say what do you want...?” Gr egg said Mia I want you...?” Mia said me why me as she backed off more and more from him...?” It seemed that he would flash before her and every
back walked she'd walk from him the faster and closer he'd get tore her closer and closer to her she cried “STOP!” he'd stop just for a second and He would say what Mia don't you want to see me...?” Mia said No, No please not right now. Then he'd flash closer and closer to her again. Mia cried Stop..., Stop... but he plead to ignore her cry and came closer Gr-egg Whispered I must look into your eyes, Mia...?”
Mia failback out of the outhouse onto the Ground outside the outhouse and he came up over her she was still Breathless and so was he as he lifted his head to look at her she saw the scariest looking face you can Imagine with his eye's black as night and mouth wide open with sharp fangs coming down tore
her with maggots falling out of it onto her she screamed and Jumped up out her bathwater screaming splashing water everywhere she looked in front her there he sits before her looking at her the same way she screamed again and this time came splashing up out
her Bath looking at her self seeing if she had the Black Muck all over her and it wasn't she was in her tub again
and Obviously, she had to Fail asleep in the tub and she just had a bad Nightmare then another nightmare in a nightmare and she gasped Breathless looked around making sure that she was in her Bathroom and not some outhouse somewhere like in her dream. And she was she
gasped taking her hands on her face awe.. my god and breathed and swallowed hard. She sit there catching her breath and finally calm down enough to shave and wash her and her hair and get out drying her hair with a towel the bathroom was all steamed up by the hot bubble bath she went to her mirror and wiped the steam with it and looked in the mirror when in behind her stood the Big tall figure with the long
Black brads and as white as a ghost looking at her from behind with his dark black eyes with his long braids hanging down over his right eye looking at her she grabbed her mouth and screamed gasped looking behind her but no one was there she looked back in the Mirror and no one
was there she gasped she said to her self OK Mia lay off the Alcohol next time she has done her thing got dressed in her long Nighty and Brushed her hair going to her living room and stopped by the kitchen to get a glass of her sweet tea and went back into the living room sitting down in her favorite chair
underneath the lamp putting her glass of tea on her table beside the
Chair with her knees to her tummy grabbed a book and started reading it was Quiet throughout her Apartment all she could hear was her reading in the Back her Mind she was just starting to get into the book she was reading and had getting Lost in the
Book like she was in it herself as the main Corrector. Then all of a sudden there was a Crash, Boom Bang of Thunder and Lightening outside her living-room window and she jumped by the sound and her Lamp started Flickering on, and off... off... and on again right when she got into her book another crash, Boom, Bang, and her lamp went off a power fail-er where all the lights had gone off and everything was Dark all she could see was The light from the Lightning
another Crash, Boom Bang she Jumped again she put her Book mark in her book on the page she was on looked around it was Pitch Black even outside she sits there in her chair with her Knees up in her chest with her arms around her legs looking around when she all of a sudden she heard something other
then the Crash, Boom, Bang of lightning it was another loud noise coming from the Kitchen in the Likes of Glasses through across the Kitchen and being broken and she froze then she sit and wait to see if she would hear it again then she heard more rakes in the Kitchen Pot's and Pans also
being through across The kitchen too Mia said who's there...?” no answer did reply then she heard
nothing then she heard something again sounded Like a picture or Two in the hallway moving then Fail off the wall, then there at the doorway from the hall to the living room stood a Big tall Dark Figure when the lightning Crashed again sending off a
Flash of Light and it whispers Mia...?” then the Lightning struck again the tall Dark figure was not there now...?” but every time the Lightning Struck and sent a Bright light along wit a Bright Fright when she has again seen the Tall Dark Figure standing there again at her Living-room door and then it went dark again then Lightning again and with a Flash of Light every time The Lightning struck the Tall Dark
the figure would Float closer and closer to her again and she freaked and said please go away it got closer and closer Mia closed her eye's Rocking Back in forwards and kept saying you're not real she opened her eye's and it had disappeared she got up and
went to the Kitchen to Grab a Knife and tried slicing it but the Knife just went right through him she tried it again go away I don't Believe in you...?” Gregg Whispered I Believe in you...?” she tried taking the Knife to him again but it just went right through him she jumped backdropping the Knife go away, and all of a sudden a Force so hard
pushed her down right in the Powl of Glass he broke face first and glass had Cut her all up she said Please just go away when she looked at her hands and all she could see was her
“Blood!” all over her hands she looked up and there he was right in her Face his face pure white he looked like the Living dead black around his eyes long Black hair and all of a sudden his mouth open again full of Sharp monster fangs top and bottom four row's of them and laughed at her. She crawled out the
Kitchen all cut up from the Broken glass trying to reach the phone in hopes it was still working somehow she had speed dial she got the phone but it falls out of her hands and the big tall dark shadow was grabbing her and pulling her from the phone and she would try and crawl back to the phone this tall dark Shadow was so strong she pushed a button on the
phone hoping it would speed dial someone in which she did but it was not 911 it was her Friend Kristy and she answered the phone she could hear Hard Breathing she said Hello...?” and she heard a light voice scared to death but weak Help Me!”
Kristy said who is this...?” all she heard was the light voice again HELP ME!” Kristy looked at her caller's Idea and saw that it was Mia...?” Kristy said Mia is this you...?”
Mia said HELP ME AGAIN Gregg's after me he won't let go he pulled her away again she Screamed go away...?” Leave me alone...?” she even heard his Voice say No...?' she would kick at him trying to fight him away...?”
Kristy started laughing OK Mia this is not Funny stop fucking around what are you doing?” Kristy heard Mia Scream again...?” Mia Screamed Help Me Plz Someone Help me...?” I'm Bleeding there's Blood Everywhere Help, Help!” then Mia
Screamed again and then the Phone Clicked off...?” Kristy said Mia, Mia you are still there Hello! Hello! Nothing it was silent as the Star's then the Busy signal came on...?” OK now Kristy was a little Scared she called Raven…?” Raven answered Greetings? how doth the!” Kristy sounded Scared Breathless Raven...?” Raven said what is it babe what's wrong...?” Kristy was crying and she asked Raven have you ever Missed with The Ouija board before tonight...?” Raven said No I heard about it from Mia's Cousin so I Thought I'd try it...?” Kristy said what did he say about it...?” Raven said Oh just some Bull Sheeit about him accidentally
Chapter Three!
“Conjuring Up some stooped Fucked up Spirit that came after him...?” Kristy said didn't you believe him...?” Raven said Of-course, not Why...?” Kristy said reamer The Spirit we Conjured up Tonight...?” Raven said what Oh Gregg it was Right...?” Kristy said Yes him Mia just called me she sounded Scared to death talking about she was Bleeding and There was Blood
everywhere and she was screaming for help she mentioned Gregg's name...?”
Raven Laughed and you Believed her she's Probably just playing a Phone Prank...?” Kristy said No Raven that's just it, I don't thank that she is what if she is Hurt and Bleeding what if it isn't a Prank what if it's real if you don't Believe me Call her and I a sure you, that you
will get a Busy signal cause it Hung up on me do it you'll see...?” Raven said yeah OK I will...?” Kristy said then Call me back...?” Raven said OK Girl lemme check this out...?” Kristy said OK Thank you Raven...?” Raven said Sure...?” So They hang up and then Raven calls Mia and Just as Kristy said it was a Busy Signal Raven Hung Up then Tried again still a Busy signal she called a couple more times still the Busy Signal OK
so now Raven was getting a little Freaked out and That was Unusual for her she calls Back Kristy, Kristy answered...?” Raven said you were right I called Five times and Still Got the busy Signal...?” Kristy said see I told you we've got to do something...?”
Raven said OK you call 911 and I'll Call her Cousin, OK Then I'll call you Back OK...?” Kristy said OK. So they Hung up again Kristy called 911 and Raven called Mia's Cousin her cousin Rolled out again...?” Kristy called 911 and they to was on their way to Mia's House Then Raven called Kristy Back and said get ready I'm on my way to get you and we will go check this out Ourselves as well...?”
Kristy said I'm ready just come and Get me....?” Raven said On My way. So they hung up then Raven took off to get Kristy and go from Kristy's to Mia's Apartment...?” Otherwise back to Mia at her Apartment still trying to get away from this so-called
Gregg Spirit that just had to be Purdy Much be a Daemonic was Pulling Mia back from the phone and Bruising her up she was already Bleeding from the Broken glass from the kitchen and he was the Domestic valence type of Spirit he had his arm around her neck and she couldn't breath was real taut around her neck Mia Tried to take his big four-arm from
her neck but she couldn't Budge it and all Mia remembered was a hard loud Beat on her Door and she Blacked out in other-words passed out when she woke she woke in The Hospital she hurt still breathless and hooked up to many tubs and things and she opened her eye's she was so
weak she was Wrapped up with bandages but she was also very bad Bruised up to but she was so Doped up with all the Medications that was going in her Ivy everything was a Blur to her...?” and she finally Failback to sleep but this time when Mia woke she was not in the same hospital she was in another one it was a Creeper one she looked around she could hear whispers in the dark sounded like she was in a sane a salient, with many people
Screaming and saying a Bunch of Crazy Sheeit but when she sat up in her bed she was not alone in the room she had a Roommate she was in a stray Jacket but her roommate was not, she wasn't even a she was he and guess who it was yes it was
Gregg...?” Gregg said Welcome to my world Bitch and he'd laugh Wickedly she screamed but she couldn't move her arm's but she jumped off her bed and started running down the Hospital Hall she kept looking behind her to see if Gregg was following right behind her when she Bumped into this other insane person Scared her and she screamed again she ran away from them from the side and through This Dark
Hospital hall with the lights Blinking on and off the further she ran Gregg was catching right up with her on her Heels she falls screamed got up ran again and all around her different Patients scream or getting the Shock Therapy she kept looking behind her for Gregg and ran right into a Black
room and Gregg Fallowed in behind her and they shut and locked the door she was all over the Darkroom trying to get away from Gregg but couldn't get away from him she was screaming kicking at him Gregg kept blinking on and off in-front her Frekken her out with the Blinking Lights and his white scary face opening his mouth wide of three row's of Sharp monster teeth and his wicked looks and Laugh's just as Gregg was coming closer tore her putting his hands around her throat then all of a sudden her Cousin Brad woke her
she was Breathless in a cold sweat and as white, as a ghost scared to Death she sit up moving her cousin out her way as Vomit came splashing a huge wave out her Mouth her cousin was a bit surprised when he looked at her and it wasn't her eye's he was looking into and
was pitch dark black eye's and she had vomited all over her but she wasn't her she was somebody else Long Black hair wet and greasy face as white as a Ghost with Pitch Black eye's and Vomit all over her Mouth and her and all of a sudden she or should I say Gregg Opened his Mouth at her Cousin with the three Row's of Sharp Monster teeth and her Cousin Brad Screams.....?”
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About the Creator
Vicky 'A' Blevins Reavis
Experienced Creative writer I have published Six books. I've been writing though
however since 2003, I write poetry, Short story's and books I am also
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