"I'm tangled in these threads"
I am a lost star wandering far from my galaxy trying to find its way back or settle in another unknown galaxy.
Within me lies a world of poetry where a weak soul is searching for the essence of love in a new existence and trying to remember what it feels like to be loved.
"Why are you writing all this?"
Maybe because one day when I am gone, someone will believe in love by reading this and know the subtle passion of love through my words. In an age where no one cares about anyone, where self is the world of self and humanity is slowly dying, in such an age, I want to write about love.
Not because love can save us, but because I want to save love. We are digging our own graves with our callous and cold hearts and plotting against our own destruction.
No one knows when the doomsday will destroy this world, but without compassion, love, and desire, this world will end very soon.
I am not writing about a broken heart but a broken world and I want to fix it.
I am no longer afraid because the pain is gone and I have become a sea of memories with nothing to hide. My words beat the silence now I have nothing to lose.
I am a random collection, I am a candle of some dark soul Let me burn until the sun of love shines and this world is illuminated by its light.
About the Creator
Naveed
Let me submit, writing and solitude are essential. Writing is not possible in Mahfil Yaran. Why a person writes, how he writes, why he thinks, nothing can be said with certainty.
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Comments (8)
Wow, your words hold so much meaning and emotion, almost reminds me of spoken word poetry the way it’s written. Love this ❤️
I am not writing about a broken heart but a broken world and I want to fix it. I think each and every one of us can relate to that line!
Love runs the world. Your story was enjoyable to read. Good work.
excellent writing
We live in a broken world of broken promises, wars, famine. I FEEL YOU
Yes, this makes you believe in love, Great writing 📝 ♥️😉💯
beautifully articulated <3
Excellent, and I do believe love will save us.