A Small Window of Hope
A Dystopian Tale
The outside world was unknown to her, but she could see a glimpse of it through the window in his room.
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He lied to her when she was searching,
Entrusting vulnerability would
Leave her easy to control with blind threats
In this new, gray world of ashes and dust,
Enslaving her to his desires and tricks.
Death loomed wicked through the darkened window.
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She turned her head away as light shone through.
Hiding her circled eyes in the pillow.
Years had turned her tender skin dry and pale
Laying only one cherished, but haunting,
Yardstick from the warmth of the gleaming sun,
Sun? From where? How? She peeked at the window.
He must have neglected to blacken it.
Enraptured now, starting to feel bold, she
Listened to what her gut instincts said -
Overlooking such large detail meant his
Ordinary guard was down - might she be
Killed for his indiscretion? Her time was
Short. She must act thoughtfully, but quickly.
Of that, she knew with no uncertainty.
Upon her captor’s loud snore, she trembled.
Terrified, she buried her eyes again.
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A distant view of sunshine beckoned her.
Denied warmth, she wilted in this stark world
Yearning to feel soft grass beneath bare feet.
Sheets rumpled to a dingy gray, like concrete
Trapped her inside this deceitful prison
Of mislead persecution, he began
Planting seeds of worthlessness to grow swift
Inside her spinning head, soiled by the cold.
A quiet girl harboring fast fading dreams,
Near hopeless for survival beyond this.
The bed smelled of mothballs and ugliness.
As compared to the promise through the glass.
Looking out the window toward the bright sky,
Everything came clear in a wild heartbeat.
The outside world, unknown by his design,
Often made scary to control her through
Lies of dangers told, brimming with deceit.
Death loomed daily with the constant sunrise.
Through a dirty window streaming
Hope, floating on a beam, gave her spirits
Rise, shaking off the shadows and the lies
Of a man-made, selfish existence.
Upon his bed of rumpled sheets,
Glimpses of light harshly reminded
Her to summon the courage to find a way.
A way to escape this dirty dungeon.
With patience, she forms a plan to break out,
Insistant she will leave this lonely life.
No tarnished locks will hold her back this time.
Doors will never open to a hard knock,
Only a window shows the unmarked path,
With persistence, her focus finds a way
Out. She must follow the light of the sun.
Finding latent strength, she breaks free. Running.
Hope fills her heart with the scent of purple
On the breeze sifting gently from the edge.
Painting the sky and the trees with color,
Even the soft grass tickling her bare feet.
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Purposefully, she faces fears alone,
Unknown how she will progress on her own.
Running, running toward the wooded edge of
Purple, where lilacs bloom and dreams blossom.
Led by butterfly wings to the horizon’s
Ever breaking dawn. Brilliant colors hold,
Shining, healing light; energy flows through
Her tired bones, refreshing thoughts of living,
Offering a renewed destination
Without the power of ghosts and monsters.
She looks back at the tiny gray shelter,
The shattered window; fragile, dirty glass
Holding her in, now open to the world -
Early light streams in, awakening him.
Putrid grunt and submissive sigh signal
An always mean bully cloakd in weak fear
The fight of a cowardly monster lost -
He rolls over in his self-made grave.
This is a fiction story written in the format of an acrostic poem. If your read the first letter of each line vertically, it spells out a phrase related to the story. Thank you for reading! Did you enjoy this style of story-telling?
About the Creator
KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
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Comments (5)
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You are the acrostic queen now!! This was really cool and so loaded with sensory details. I loved that she broke free. Well done :)
Interesting and clever take on the challenge
Very creative. Well done.
Really loved your take on this! Nicely done :)
Such an interesting and creative way to interpret the prompt! I loved it!
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