A Curious Read.
The Vocal + Assist Lost in a Story Challenge

This story is part of the Vocal + Assist on Facebook Lost in a Story Challenge. You can learn more about it here:
A little predicatble I know, but I just couldn't help but give it a go!
“Down, down, down. There was nothing else to do.”
As I read I began to feel a little queasy. My palms were damp with anticipation and the whiteness of my room began to contort, the book I held between my childish hands pulsated rhythmically and it grew. It grew and grew until I could no longer contain it. It towered over me. Page 3 swirled into a whirlpool of words.

Down,
Down,
Down.
Until it swallowed me whole like a whale snacking on a minnow.
Thump.
He peered suspiciously into my face as if inspecting a sample for a biology experiment. His hair flew in wisps, sprouting wildly from the underside of his top hat, “Have I gone quite mad?” He giggled hysterically. “Yes, yes, yes. I am sure it is terribly quite true.” He pointed at me accusatorily, “For you are not she!”
He plopped down on the floor with a terrible thud.
I could barely gather my voice before the hare interrupted.
“Exactly so” He proclaimed, holding up his monocle for a closer inspection of my visage. Just to be sure. “It is indeed not she”
“Tea?” The hatter sprang from the floor.
I nodded, still bewildered. Possibly concussed.
“Milk? Sugar? Lemon? Candy cane!” He poured the azure liquid from the teapot with a swift movement and placed a china cup and saucer in front of me. I reached out my hand –
‘You’re late. Late. A white bunny leapt in front of me, spilling tea across the chequered table cloth. He grabbed my hand in his paw and waved his pocket watch impatiently, “late!”
I had no idea for what.
As I was dragged from the table by a feverish rabbit, I heard The March Hare announce haughtily, “Well, that was rather fleeting. And rather impertinent, don’t you think?”
About the Creator
Celia in Underland
Just a voice finding its echo. Teacher - reader- bystander -weird as a koala in The Arctic, but slowly learning to ditch the ecalptus and embrace the ice pop. #evolutionaryroad
Comments (20)
Great story! So fun and really captured the flavor of Alice in Wonderland 💙Anneliese
This is perfect and of course, fitting! Congrats on the TS. :)
Congratulation Celia on your Top Story!!!
Awesome 👍 Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Great job with this! Congratulations!
These unofficial challenges are officially fun, aren't they? Well down, I mean done!
Aww lovely! Congratulations 🎉 😇🥰
Very curious indeed!
Impressive
That was wonderful. Congrats on the TS.
Wooooo! Congrats on Top Story. Love this and it may be predictable, but you did an awesome job!
Haven't read this challenge yet but this is definitely Alice.
I really like the way you echoed the speech patterns, tone and felt sense of the original here, this was brilliant.
Dang it! He didn't let you drink your tea! Lol! This was so fun!
One of the trippiest tales ever told. That is an interesting avatar
Alice really needs to get off what ever it is she’s taking. Funny read!
Celia, are you feeling a little down in the proverbial rabbit hole of Wonderland?
Very good Celia... I enjoyed you unique little twist. Great job!!! I also subscribed to you!!!
😉📝Nice, I used to have a Bunny 🐰 when I was in Grade school 🍎 👍
Congratulations! Great work!