Reading "three to" feeling

In the past year, I have written more than a dozen compositions, four of which were well received by teachers, classmates and parents and published in Suining Daily. From scratch analysis, evaluation of these four articles, let me gain a lot.

The first article I published was "Visiting Shanghai". This is a travelogue of my ten. One holiday to Shanghai. The article describes the strange mountains, waters and scenery I saw in Shanghai, the "Oriental Pearl", the aquarium, the Huangpu River and so on. It also describes my experience of visiting Shanghai for the first time. The biggest "highlight" of this article is: the description of the landscape, scenic spots specific; Fluent sentences, the use of some good words and sentences; Express the feeling is more real. Its deficiency lies in: the description of landscape, scenic spots detailed slightly improper; The sentences describing the landscape are repeated; Saliva more, after several modifications to "a little decent".

In an examination, I wrote an article "Harmonious Forest World". Dad felt very good after reading, and recommended publication. Through the description of different scenery in spring, summer, autumn and winter, as well as the description of the living habits and characteristics of animals in different seasons, the paper reflects that the forest world is harmonious and beautiful. The article is outstanding in the following aspects: first, the theme is distinct. People are creating a harmonious society, and the animals in the forest world are also advocating harmony; Secondly, the description of the four seasons is specific and vivid, and the animals to be described are representative. Third, the sentence is refined, smooth, no lack of good words. In the first draft, there are descriptions of animals fighting and killing, which dilute the theme of harmony. In addition, the description of individual animal habits is inconsistent with common sense of life, which is the biggest shortcoming of this article.

The 5.12 Wenchuan earthquake shocked the world and made us deeply feel the suffering brought by the disaster. I read the "earthquake relief hero boy" after a book, wrote a reading. By telling the heroic deeds of Zhang Chunling and Lin Hao, the article expresses its respect and admiration for the heroic youth of earthquake relief. This article has two merits. First, I read the book online shortly after its release and wrote my inner feelings. Secondly, it really wrote the tribulations and experiences of the heroic young men at that time. But this article retells the story of the hero boy too much language, let the whole article "tarnish".

The school requires you to write about your feelings by quoting a famous person. The article through telling their own learning, composition experience and feelings, realized the learning, composition to heart, eye, mouth "three to" importance. This article spent a lot of effort, the advantages are more prominent: first, with their own experience to write feelings, vivid image, easy to resonate; Secondly, the article sums up an operable learning and composition method; Third, I have a deep understanding of this famous saying and can easily achieve the effect of drawing parallels. But this article has a small regret, is to study, composition experience summary, refining is not very good.

Through the analysis of the gains and losses of these four articles, I deeply feel: a strong interest in writing, is the source of power to write good articles; To write a composition, write the true feelings of the heart, avoid delicate operation; Articles can only be "brilliant" after more writing and more changes.