Saroyan Coles
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I want to empower others with my writing. I have always dreamed of seeing my name, on something.
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Never Giving up on Myself:
Never Giving up on Myself Angela H. Fitts is her first-ever published work. There are grammatical errors, but overall, the pace of her book was spot on. The book opens with her birthdate and defines her character traits. According to Angela, “Playing music keeps my mind at peace.” (p. 7) I found this to be a great attention grabber to hook the reader in. I would have loved to have had an example of lyrics block quoted to emphasize her point further. “We were wearing ponytails, when I met her.” (p.9) This quote creates great imagery. Angela goes on to talk about the weight of heartbreak she has endured. I would love to see, the author structure her book over three main events of heartbreak. That way her personal stories developed further.
By Saroyan Coles2 years ago in Journal