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Your Beautiful World

Unofficial Rewrite Of “Creep”

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 22 days ago 1 min read
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Your Beautiful World
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You’re a beautiful angel

A special body and soul

You care when I’m hurt, and cry out of control

I float like a feather, but I don’t belong at your door

A fuckin weirdo you don’t want in control

Run, fuckin run

Before you notice

I’m a creep

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Mark Graham19 days ago

    Quite different.

  • Cathy holmes21 days ago

    Oh. This is about the song. Right? Sorry, I've been kinda out of touch lately.

  • "I float like a feather, but I don’t belong at your door" I loved it! So raw and funky :)

  • Grz Colm22 days ago

    Nice revisit of the song! 😄👍

  • "A fuckin weirdo you don’t want in control" Yup, that's me. You don't want me in control 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Andrea Corwin 22 days ago

    Whoa, I'm running! LOL, loved this.

  • Babs Iverson22 days ago

    Glad this was for fun!!! ❤️❤️💕

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