i lost you
but i never had you,
i needed you,
but i never wanted to.
i want to say
i miss you:
it is both a confession
and a lie.
i want to forget
and i want to remember
how i was immersed in your waters,
drowning.
i want to hold your face
and slap your face:
i want to comfort you
and punish you.
i want to want
others
but my heart
is at your feet.
i want to be yours
and nobody’s:
i knew you’d never
keep me.
so really thank you
and fuck you
for letting
me go.
About the Creator
Sara
Don’t look for love.
Be love.
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Comments (7)
"it is both a confession and a lie." Simply beautiful!
Wow! Love it.
Ouch! This packs a stunning punch at the end. Always so evocative and that pic is fire, Sara! Beautiful work!
Thank you and fuck you so, so relateable! Powerful and beautifully expressed Sara 🤍
a wonderful piece of writing.
Powerful expression
I love your writing. All of it.