Dancing under moonlight;
Innocence lost,
Somewhere far behind.
Tomorrow’s worry forgotten, to
Redhead dreams tonight.
Another glance,
Catches my eye.
Twists my heart.
Is it love?
Or
Nothing but desire?
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Shane Dobbie
If writing is a performance art then I’m tap dancing in wellies.
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Time for #2
This is the second article on my review of the ideas in The Four Agreements. Here's the first article: I knew that I'd move forward with this series, but I put it off as Agreement #2 is a big stumbling block for me. I'd like to say I decided to get out of my own way and thus wrote this, but that isn't the truth. (Since Agreement #1 is to Be Impeccable with Your Word I surely need to own up to that)
By Judey Kalchik 3 days ago in BookClub
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Captivating emotions woven in moonlit steps.
This is lovely. The first line had me hooked
Great acrostic, Shane! Love the little story you told!
I'm glad Paul shared this one. It was spot on.
Beautiful… looking forward to reading more of your work 😇 also excited to find another Scot on here 🙂
Beautiful work Shane!
Lol..I keep forgetting to comment before publishing this week. This is such a strong acrostic for that challenge, very surprised it didn't make the winners circle! Well done on this, Shane!
Can't imagine how I missed this before. Great job, Shane!
"Is it love? Or Nothing but desire?" The eternal question! Enjoyed this and have subscribed!
Lovely!
I can answer that. Does it involve bathing suit parts?