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Sharp

I'm tired and snippy.

By Silver Serpent BooksPublished 15 days ago 1 min read
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Sharp
Photo by Andrey Grinkevich on Unsplash

I am coarse, rough around the edges but not like sand.

Not in the way that it can feel soft, masquerade as something nice.

I am the jagged teeth of a smooth stone wall,

Catching flesh on a surprise brush and ripping it open,

Drawing blood.

.

Everything about me is rough in an obvious, dangerous way.

The way you see wood splintering along a handrail

Or a rusted pair of scissors, cast haphazardly on a bench.

The thin thorns on the rose, not big but willing to bite.

Willing to expose the soft insides of a hard outside.

.

I've become sharp,

Unblinkingly able to slice open the lies

And let uncomfortable truths stain the grass red.

The shame of it all, is that somewhere along the way

I cut myself open too, a rose bush strangled by its thorns.

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About the Creator

Silver Serpent Books

Writer. Interested in all the rocks people have forgotten to turn over. There are whole worlds under there, you know. Dark ones too, even better.

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Joe O’Connor11 days ago

    I was intrigued by the image you chose, and the poem certainly lived up to it! The imagery you've created is almost tangible

  • D.K. Shepard12 days ago

    Such rich imagery of roughness and pain. This last stanza really gave wings to the particulars

  • This was so dark, intense and relatable! Loved your poem!

  • Catsidhe15 days ago

    This hits home. Beautiful!

  • Christy Munson15 days ago

    I ate this up. The corrosive edges so honestly exposed feel like a memory or two, once removed. Brilliantly written and evocative!

  • D. J. Reddall15 days ago

    It takes a certain softness, to confess to being sharp. Nicely done!

  • Margaret Brennan15 days ago

    omg, I think you've crawled inside my brain and pulled out a few thoughts. LOVE this; it's so relatable.

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