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Serene Sunset

When the sky speaks to you and you can only answer with your own words that provide just a smattering of the feeling its presence evoked

By Rachel DeemingPublished 15 days ago 1 min read
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Serene Sunset
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Trees zip past and we roll over the hills;

High hedgerows are clustered and laced with cow parsley,

Disappearing into clumps as the dusk rises to claim them.

Green lumps, richly moist, richly fertile, bask in lowering light.

The sky is bluest blue, like a baby's blanket spread,

But gradually peach clouds of the finest fleece

Enfold the day, and their persistent cosseting

Is rippling the heavens into dappled stripes

Of harmonious beauty that startle my eyes

With their glory. A thin spire skewers the magnificent light;

It has long since pierced the naval of the sun god

With its earthly wrought black point and stands tall,

savouring its Impressionist background of dabs.

It has a power, above the town as its bell sounds,

But the sky is trumping its architectural spire tonight.

It is serene, this sunset and as I head towards it

And it sinks behind the zigzag of roofs and smoking stacks

Of George and George and George and the golden stone

Wrenched and picked and axed from its bed,

I am overwhelmed: by beauty; by nature; by love.

My heart is warm and my eyes are full.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 days ago

    Beautiful!!! I love the imagery and peacefulness this poem brought me!! Great work Rachel!!

  • D.K. Shepard12 days ago

    What a pleasant read! Could picture the sky’s transformation with each line

  • Belle13 days ago

    Wonderful, Rachel. The imagery is astounding!

  • Katarzyna Popiel14 days ago

    Wow, I could feel it in this poem, this wonderfully undescribable ambience that I've always considered uniquely British. You have just described it!

  • Hannah Moore14 days ago

    So lovely. I didn't get all the Georges though?

  • You painted such a beautiful picture with your words! Loved your poem!

  • angela hepworth15 days ago

    Your wordplay is next level, Rachel!

  • John Cox15 days ago

    You are truly a wonderful poet, Rachel.

  • Cathy holmes15 days ago

    Beautifully descriptive. Well done.

  • Gerard DiLeo15 days ago

    Cosseting, my new word of the day.

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