Serendipitous Encounter
A little poem about the eclipse
Every heart stutters and every footstep falls silent in
Concern for the blackening sky, the shadowed ground, the bright sun
Looming large, it's brightness feeding the blue shifting to
Ink spilled across the earth.
Purpose-built nothing, a phenomenal happenstance, a beautiful,
Serendipitous
Encounter with the lovely grey moon and her blazing lover.
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Silver Serpent Books
Writer. Interested in all the rocks people have forgotten to turn over. There are whole worlds under there, you know. Dark ones too, even better.
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Comments (8)
This is great, especially that last line!
love this: "Encounter with the lovely grey moon and her blazing lover."
Beautiful. I love the last line: 'the lovely grey moon and her blazing lover.'
You keep wooing me back for more. Is this in reference to the eclipse?
Oh, this brought such a smile....incredible poem!
Loved the line about ink spilling! You string words together in such an impactful way!
Really wonderful imagery in this and such lovely word choices :)
Oh...this is so eloquent and beautiful. Well done.