Rise, Again
Wonderful undulation
Empires. Breaking waves.
Arcing moon. Your tiny chest.
Rise ... And fall ... And rise ...
About the Creator
Sonia Heidi Unruh
I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.
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I have noticed that in the professional sphere, as far as I have noticed, that many people choose to come to work, mainly with the intention of collecting a paycheck, which I completely understand, unfortunately, we all need money to survive in this world. I also feel very strongly about the fact that if you are going to work in a profession, you should certainly treat that profession, whatever it may be, with the dignity that its purpose entails, whether you are working in the medical field, or working at a fast food restaurant, you should do you best to do the best job you can, because when it comes right down to it, we are all humans, going through the trials, and challenges that this life can bring us, by working together.
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Comparison between an empire, waves, moon and a tiny chest rising and falling. Great analogy...smart mix and blend. Congrats.
Nice job! 👍
Simply beautiful.
Congrats on Top Story!!
This was so powerful. I was disappointed at the end because I craved more.
You have written so many beautiful stories your story is admirable please visit my vocal id and read a story please
good
This is beautiful
Marvelous work! Keep it going—congrats!
This is gorgeous!✨💕
Stunning! Well done!
Incredibly beautiful 🤩
😭❤️. So gorgeous.
There's like eternity here but also fragility. I think it's empires that makes me feel like it could all come crashing down. Not the waves or the moon.
Gorgeous. Quite the diamond, shaped and cut beautifully. ❤️
You have written very beautifully, your writings are admirable, I invite you to visit my vocal id
This is wonderful, so huge, and so tiny without being any less huge.
Nice words
beautiful!
❣️Congrats!!
Yes. You depict heaven and the fragility of earthly mortality all in one very intentional and poignant piece. Beautiful.
Really, really lovely 💙
Simple life
Simply beautiful. Congrats on the TS
Beautiful description of life.