Lost Letters
For Poppy's Prompts #5 - May
By Cathy holmesPublished 15 days ago β’ Updated 15 days ago β’ 1 min read
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For Poppy's Prompts #5. Words: paint, erode, envelope, descend, wind
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Painted thoughts erode
in wind-battered envelopes;
while love remains lost,
and our future descends into the same frozen void
as those letters you say you never received.
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About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
Comments (12)
Wow!π΅β¦ this such an emotive poem which seamlessly interweaves the random word prompts.β
Damn this hit hard. Made me think of The Notebook. "Love remains lost" was a heartbreaking line and that ending was so solid. I adored this Cathy.
Love this. I wrote a story along these lines for the Misplaced challenge ππ
You've nicely written it.
Beautiful Cathy
That last line was brutally brilliant! Great use of Poppyβs words!
Love this!!!πβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Awesome writing my dear friend.
Gosh this was so poignant and those last two lines especially hit me so hard! Loved your poem so much!
So very lovely and tragic. The idea of love not just lost but misplaced is powerfully rendered here. Really well done, Cathy!
So good!
Nicely done.