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For Poppy's Prompts #5 - May

By Cathy holmesPublished 15 days ago β€’ Updated 15 days ago β€’ 1 min read
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For Poppy's Prompts #5. Words: paint, erode, envelope, descend, wind

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Painted thoughts erode

in wind-battered envelopes;

while love remains lost,

and our future descends into the same frozen void

as those letters you say you never received.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Angie the Archivist πŸ“šπŸͺΆ5 days ago

    Wow!πŸ˜΅β€¦ this such an emotive poem which seamlessly interweaves the random word prompts.βœ…

  • Poppy 5 days ago

    Damn this hit hard. Made me think of The Notebook. "Love remains lost" was a heartbreaking line and that ending was so solid. I adored this Cathy.

  • L.C. SchΓ€fer12 days ago

    Love this. I wrote a story along these lines for the Misplaced challenge πŸ˜πŸ‘

  • You've nicely written it.

  • Beautiful Cathy

  • D.K. Shepard13 days ago

    That last line was brutally brilliant! Great use of Poppy’s words!

  • Babs Iverson14 days ago

    Love this!!!πŸ’•β€οΈβ€οΈ

  • Awesome writing my dear friend.

  • Gosh this was so poignant and those last two lines especially hit me so hard! Loved your poem so much!

  • John Cox14 days ago

    So very lovely and tragic. The idea of love not just lost but misplaced is powerfully rendered here. Really well done, Cathy!

  • Caroline Craven15 days ago

    So good!

  • Hannah Moore15 days ago

    Nicely done.

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