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Evanescent: A Haiku

A wonderous gift

By Amber BristowPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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A wonderous gift,

Blooming like bright daylilies,

Time, evanescent.

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Amber Bristow

Regularly participating in writing challenges and #writerslift on Twitter

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Colt Hendersonabout a year ago

    Fantastic

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    I love every bit of this. From the perfect name and subtitle to every perfect and well-placed word. Sublime stuff, Amber!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    This is beautiful Rick

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Very nicely done. Love it

  • Gosh, this was so beautiful! I loved it so much!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh, I love this :) Truly beautiful and clever! ❤️

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Time truly is a gift. And I love your use of daylilies 🤗

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