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138 — Electrostatic Arrogance

For Friday, May 17: Day 138 of the 2024 Story-a-Day Challenge

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 16 days ago Updated 16 days ago 2 min read
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Going rogue.

There is a Limbo, despite its ecclesiastical decommission. It persists. There's a place for everything, and Limbo still serves a purpose.

Behind closed doors is the undisturbed dust of ages. The near-misses of all of Man's epochs, arrogantly ramparted, fuel the disturbed who have forgotten their quests.

And, there, hide many unmatched, estranged socks.

While there are no longer cries of unbaptized babies heard from beyond Limbo's doors, there can still be heard the wails of unfulfilled dreams, the howls of unrequited loves, the anguished grunts of insincere promises.

And the low crackling of electrostatically charged socks.

Time has no meaning there, and so the promise of "one day..." is paradox. One day...dreams realized, love reciprocated, and promises made good.

One day...

...dreams of the incapable will be fulfilled...

...loves of those who grieve missed opportunities will be consummated...

...anger from empty, unkept promises will be replaced with hope, redemption, and follow-through.

Those who lock themselves behind these doors--from the inside, at their own insistence--will no longer be cha'grinning like that one divorced sockclown desperately clinging inside the drying machine for dear life, in solemn tenacity as transient and fragile as its electrostatic energy.

I am such a unipod: I have been to Limbo and back; I have walked the semibare footwalk.

I've been shocked by the negative charge of lost ions--lost to those who were resolutely insulated, non-conductive. I thought the solution was wearing no socks at all, but all I did was stub toes--my every one, one or two at a time--each footfall with a sad yarn to spin.

Walking on mismatched feet--one fixed, but one afoot--provokes twirling in place and hopscotching the uneven stones of life's journey. A centrifugal gait creates spin, from which those without an adequate grip are flung away into the vacuum of space, where uneven charges never dissipate.

If Hell is exothermic and Heaven esoterically exquisite, then I am coldblooded, assimilating the ambiance of the environment--and of my own making.

For those who have just one final spark to give...

For those who will consider using that spark to unlock their doors instead of remaining negatively, self-destructively charged...

For them...they will attain an actualization of rejoining life's fashionable wardrobe.

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AUTHOR'S NOTE:

For Friday, May 17, Day 138 of the Story-a-Day Challenge.

366 WORDS (without A/N)

All pictures are AI-generated, but the mismatch is not!

ABOUT THIS STORY:

Socks and existentialism. Yea, the metaphor is a stretch. Yet, we are social creatures who don't like being hung out to dry. We don't like being separated. And when we choose to do it to ourselves, we're shooting ourselves in the foot (no good sock goes unpunished).

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. In Life Phase II: Living and writing from a decommissioned church in Hull, MA. (Phase I was New Orleans and everything that entails. Hippocampus, behave!

https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran15 days ago

    Whoaaaa, I'm so amazed at the way your brain works!! This was so brilliant!

  • Well-wrought! There's also the story of old Jack O' Lantern, not allowed into Heaven or Hell or even Purgatory, but cursed... or blessed, depending on how one looks at it... to eternally wander. In and out of the other stories, but never stuck in one of his own. Frees him to do nasty stuff... but last time I saw him, he was quietly doing good deeds with no desire for reward. I was like: "What the Hell, dude? Trying to repent now?" and he was like: "I got bored. Don't give the big guy any ideas! I like it better here. Trumpets, angels, pearly gates, bright lights that hurt my eyes... just not for me!" Well, can't blame me for trying to sock it to him...

  • Rob Angeli16 days ago

    Socks lost to the dryer again, perfectly purgatorial. Good move from the in-between space where socks are lost, to the in-between space where dreams are lost.

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