“I’m stomping on wittle-green-frogs”,
“My new waincoat keeps me dry”,
“It’s fun playing in the wain”,
“Mum said it’s okay (I think..)”
“I really really wuv the wain -”,
“Do you like the wain too?”
Notes: This is my very humble little attempt at Mother Combs’ unoffical “November Rain challenge”, inspired by her chosen image above and using the 6W6L structure (six lines, each with six words).
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Grz Colm
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Tea set by a suffragette
Pankhurst is a name well known to the history of women’s suffrage. Who hasn't heard the name Emmaline Pankhurst, founder of the Women's Social and Political Union (WSPU), an all-women organisation campaigning for the right to vote? The group that helped to achieve the right to vote for women in Great Britain and Ireland in 1918. Some know of her daughter Christabel, both being honoured by the Pankhurst memorial in Victoria Palace Gardens, London, right next to the UK Parliament buildings. Sylvia Pankhurst is notably not included in the monument. Why? Because she split with the WSPU to campaign against Britain's entry into First World War.
By Raymond G. Taylorabout 21 hours ago in Art
Comments (26)
Adorable! 😁
This was so clever and, yes, cute. I like the way you think.
Wow, that was adorable!
Adorable! Super clever to write it in the little boy's voice. I love this!
This was so good, love the fact you choose to do it from a child's perspective and with a childlike voice. Great great entry into this challenge. Well done, sir!
This was a cute poem, I like the narrative voice you chose for it! It was fun and brought a smile to my face! 😊
me wuv the wittle gween poem. So vewwy gweat. Hello Gwrz.
This is adorable 💜💜💜
Cute!
Cute and very endearing and innocent 💙Anneliese
Oh my goodness. That is so sweet. You brought the picture to life. Wonderful job.
That was cute
This just so adorable! Love it!
Why is he stomping on those wittle green frogs? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I love the rain..., but stomping on little green frogs? My heart breaks even as I remember how innocent & authentic that is to childhood.
AWWWWW
Omg! This piece warmed my heart! Awesome job G!
Ah, so cute. I wuv the wain too. Takes me back to days with my little people.
Perfect! A child’s playful imagination. Very well done, my friend.
Cute! Cute! Cute! I love it.
Excellent job 🥰
Soooo cuteeee!
So cute, Grz! Love this little poem, and the sweet voice of the child. Precious! 💞💫
This is so cute. I love this, Grz. This is great.
wuvwey wittle poem