Dear Sky,
It's easy to recall
the day we first met,
the way you blushed,
the way I swayed.
The stars in your eye
reflected back in mine
like a thousand, thousand
diamonds winking.
Your breath against my skin,
sending ripples with the tide,
sending shivers down
into the deepest part of me.
Where none but you can see
the heart beating beneath the serene stillness
of a blue veil meant to conceal,
of stormy waves meant to thrash
and crash and seal away
the wagging tongues of those
who seek to pry my secrets.
But never you.
Never your gentle kiss,
always glittering with the dawn,
always promising, never failing
to sweep me out
and draw me
further into the horizon.
Forever yours,
Sea.
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Kelly Robertson
Wrangler of chaos. Creator of more. Writing whatever my heart desires, from fantasy to poetry and more!
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Comments (16)
This is just so beautifully heartfelt & expressive. I love this.
Anything with the sea and I am there! Thanks for this little evocative journey! ☺️👏
This is such a "showing" poem, I could easily visualize it. Impressive and beautiful.
Kelly, wow! Just wow! Love the connection that was hidden but so obvious.
This is beautiful!
Stunningly beautiful - Loved the dual levels of it so much 🤍
Loved this amazing poetic look at the sea and sky
This is just gorgeous, I'm so glad 😍 followed that link!
This is so damn beautiful. So creative yet has an innocent cuteness to it, but also so much depth.
This is art. I love it ❤️✨
How did I miss this one! Gorgeous, thank you for putting it in my eyes 😁
Gorgeous visuals here!! 👏👏👏I love your unique idea for this challenge too!
Oh my, this is gorgeous. Love it.
Awww, this was just so sweet and lovely! Such a beautifully written poem!
Lots of lovely imagery. I enjoyed that little break from it all, thanks Kelly!
Very serene and beautiful description