The Lamp that Lights the Room
The common thing taken for advantage
You shine so bright
Spreading your wonderful light
Throughout the room
So all you can see all the room
Of you amazing light
The paths are crystal clear
And no fear from the into anything
Now the darkness does not creep
Until I am ready to go to sleep
So many just ignore you
Until your bulb goes out
Then you are no longer ordinary
You are a great invention
So when you come on and bring light back
I appreciate the use of you in fact
Before you there was just candles
And darkness came quick
So how great you came in fact
About the Creator
Sarah Danaher
I enjoy writing for fun. I like to write for several genres including fantasy, poetry, and dystopian, but I am open to trying other genres too. It has been a source of stress relief from my busy life.
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Nice job
This was so wonderful! Very beautifully written!