Strangely, my name is
"Strangely Art" Prompt challenge! By Kodah
I fell so madly in love with you, my Jade skinned Indian love,
Your mer-tail like a jewel, so bright teal
Your long limbs so elegantly placed against my skin, so cold and wet and
Dead
You grabbed my key, ‘round my limp neck
And kissed it with a slimy mouth
I longed to kiss, oh my goodness how I wish I could kiss her now
I had drawn my last breath as my human lover
Threw me into the sea, hard like a stone
But you made me feel like I was breathless when your big brown eyes stared deep, deep
Down into my half-cut head
A light affixed like a blue flame from Heaven your jaws sinking into my throat
Felt like a savage love bite
Were you a vampire or a mermaid
Or a serpent or a dragon
You, Demon-Mellow-Eyes
Captured by the dark side of the moonlight
I was so enhanced by your enthralling beauty
So painful, I felt my soul burn and scream and cry
Strangely, my name is
Death, becomes my nickname
Becomes my spirit
As we collide, colluded
And colored by one
Frightening pale blue, fall colored night
Nightmare that I want to die of
For my love of your soul-sucking eyes
Became my soul-mate
A gothic romance in a very short tomb.
About the Creator
Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos,
I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels
The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella The Job and Atonement will be published this year by JMS Books
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Comments (9)
I've mentioned Maldoror elsewhere. This resonates on that level, dark and sensuous, a sumptuous bite of the forbidden fruit! Well-wrought!
Sensual and dark—loved it!
wow!! I was always intrigued by the thought of mermaids but now, I'm not so sure. I certainly don't want to meet one. Yet, this story is fantastic. Makes my skin crawl and I'm sure that was your intention. Bravo on a story well done.
That was extremely dark, a little "eww," and a little sexy. Excellent entry.
Wow, I will need to read that over again to take it all in
There's this artistic, abstract component within your piece that is just so magical! Incredible entry! Thanks so much for the entry! Good-luck! 💌💝
Oooo, a dark romance! This was so well done Merly!
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A terrifying and beautiful tale...