A Slice Of Hope - Eko Bintang
Bitter melon seeds
Water the ground like bullets
Planted, as children
About the Creator
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I will not say: do not weep; for not all tears are an evil
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (3)
So many layers to these words, sad, happy, old life growing up into new life. Hope, possibilities, on and on I still go. Lovely and deep words.
And what will grow? There's a lot to play with from this, in my mind. It's meaning is not clear and so my brain lingers on possibilities.
Wow, amazing haiku!🫶