Passion in Motion
Love Mode
Danger, love is directly ahead,
Intimacy rising like leavened bread;
Smiles speaking to the gazing eye,
Touching sensations, don’t be shy;
Reaching levels beyond the moon,
Ascending sensually, over a swoon,
Caressing gently, doesn’t take much,
Trembling at the slightest touch,
Invasion of a virgin soul,
Obtaining loss of total control;
Nervousness invokes a fidgety toll!!
Been somewhat sidelined lately with unforeseen and certainly unwanted events, some calm has returned so figured I’d give the latest challenge a challenge. Thanks for reading!!
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Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Welcome to my new series, a weekly blog on what’s inspiring me. I spent much of last week in bed with a stomach bug. I’ll spare you the details of that—but in addition to the grotesque physical symptoms, I had some fever dreams I won’t soon forget. Imagine my surprise to see Vocal’s newest challenge: Write a fiction story about a recurring dream or nightmare.
By Davina Zinn McKee3 days ago in Journal
Comments (10)
Beautiful piece, Moe. Well done.
So glad things are better for you! Loved your poem!
Nice one ❤️🔥📝😉💯❗
Good to see you back. Love can definitely be a distraction sometimes! Good one! 👍Hope things are alright on your end Moe.
Loved the poem and I hope the recent calm only grows
Glad to see you back, buddy! This is a great restart!
Welcome back and lovely piece to start with ❤️ Love that first line especially.
Loved your return piece! So beautiful :) Glad you're doing better!
So glad to have you back, Moe! I hope all is well ❤️ This poem is so beautifully done!!
Hope all is well, Moe. Glad to see you back at it with this sensuous poem that reminds me of first love! 💖