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Ode to the Nightstand

what still stands beside me

By Kay HusnickPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Ode to the Nightstand
Photo by Christopher Jolly on Unsplash

I expected it to be gone, taken apart and packed away in the back of the Subaru by the time I got home,

but instead, it became one of the only things you told me would be left behind on purpose

now it's a reminder of what once was

one of many, but one that will stay exactly where you left it

it's funny how something that comes apart so easily turns out to be sturdier than we were

maybe it's about the foundation

the four legs you turned tightly into place don't feel insecurity; they won't collapse under the slightest pressure

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Kay Husnick

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  • Christy Munson3 days ago

    Great PoV and use of metaphor. Loved this piece.

  • Carly Bush5 months ago

    Oh wow, I love this. There's something so poignant yet healing about it. The extended metaphor works well. And you chose a great photo to go along with it, too.

  • Cyrus6 months ago

    Great way of flaming exes!

  • Test6 months ago

    I really enjoyed this. Your style is really unique and your voice shines through on this. "it's funny how something that comes apart so easily turns out to be sturdier than we were" What a powerful gut punch. Well done.

  • Nice one! I like your style, so casual and so deep at the same time.

  • Jazzy 9 months ago

    This was a really cute ode 😭

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