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Nature Of A Story

Elements Of A Journey

By sleepy draftsPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2023
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Nature Of A Story
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a seed is planted,

nurtured by soil's caress

until stories grow.

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water's soft healing

can cut through steel at high speeds.

kind words are currents.

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ideas move like clouds:

some drift away in fragments,

while others find shape.

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stories can ignite

from pages or sparks between

friends and bonfires.

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sleepy drafts

a sleepy writer named em :)

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  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydred9 months ago

    Some wonderful words in these nature driven Senryū and a well deserved Top Story that I missed

  • Sonia Heidi Unruhabout a year ago

    Brilliant metaphors. The third verse particularly resonated with me- that early stage of developing a story idea when you're not sure if it will dissipate or form into something definite. Well done.

  • Melanie Tongmarabout a year ago

    Lovely - the one about clouds is quite special.

  • Mary E Bradburyabout a year ago

    I really liked this one…there was a playful yet soulful vibe.

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story!! Lovely

  • Inspiring and beautiful.

  • Rachel Roseabout a year ago

    Kind words are currents. Love that line

  • Bonnie JS Eglinabout a year ago

    Oh Congrats on Top Story! I just saw on vocal's post in my blog feed. SHARING on my blog now! Cool. Have a nice day

  • Bonnie JS Eglinabout a year ago

    Wow ...very elegant. Love the gentle vibe it stirs. Also. NICE to see an example of how it looks with all 4 in one piece. I did all mine separate pieces. Wondered how it'd look as 1... (Thought it would feel cluttered) Wasn't sure Enjoyed your work!

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  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Such a creative premise! Love it and Congrats on Top Story!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats on the top story

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    Nice quadra-haiku

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Simply gorgeous and inspirational. Amazing work, and congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    Simply gorgeous! Very nice! :)

  • Jo Croabout a year ago

    Lovely x

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Yes!!!! This so deserved a Top Story, congratulations!!

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    Loving this concept! Great haikuing!

  • Savannah Svetaabout a year ago

    i adored this <3 so beautiful!

  • Your choice of words were so beautiful! Loved this gorgeous Haiku!

  • Testabout a year ago

    You have such a beautiful way of weaving words, my friend 🥰

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Wow, I am in love with the way you tied all those ideas together. So amazing!!!

  • Colt Hendersonabout a year ago

    Loved this!

  • I really luv this, it's excellent

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