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Mother Nature

Eclipse this Winter and Give Us Spring.

By Jen Parkhill “JP”Published about a month ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in In Eclipse Challenge
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Mother Nature
Photo by Rosanna Gaddoni on Unsplash

Every time I set my glass down, it leaves a ring.

Cool water in that familiar shape of infinity.

Little planet of molecules, combed right out of the air, as if cloud carried.

I fall to my knees in reverence, complex miracles of mundanity, this sparkling symphony, our beloved galaxy.

Phenomenon of thunder clouds banging with soul-splitting sound, rain falling from the open hand of gravity.

So tender are the leaves that raise their flags on the branches of trees, offering shade from sun's blazing heat.

Eclipsed by winter woe and longing, we lick our wounds and lay in wait for mother's womb to deliver spring.

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About the Creator

Jen Parkhill “JP”

Jen Parkhill “JP”, a first generation Cuban-American artist and proud member of the LGBTQIA+ community. Cat dad, writer, filmmaker, actor, friend, and graduate of the Tisch School of the Arts, NYU.

Hurling through time.

@jenparkhill

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Shirley Belkabout 14 hours ago

    Congratulations!

  • Christy Munsonabout 15 hours ago

    Love your acrostic! Every line sings but this one gets me especially: "rain falling from the open hand of gravity". Wow. Lush words. Brilliant! Congratulations on your placement! 🥳

  • Babs Iversonabout 15 hours ago

    Congratulations on the runner up win!°

  • Salako Emmanuel29 days ago

    This is good

  • Haytham Trueheartabout a month ago

    Beautiful piece of mother earth!

  • Natalie Wilkinsonabout a month ago

    Beautiful, Jen. Congratulations on the Top Story designation.

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Wow this is amazing! Congratulations!

  • Novel Allenabout a month ago

    Love the last verse. Lovely birth of all the earth. Congrats.

  • ROCK about a month ago

    I so loved this; I must say the ECLIPSE challenge has it's work cut out for the judges ( whoever they are). This would be right up there with my top five thuse far. Pure and wondrous creation!

  • JBazabout a month ago

    Right from the first line you set a picture before us. Congratulations

  • Katherine D. Grahamabout a month ago

    lovely! congratulations.

  • Shailender Sharma Bloggerabout a month ago

    congratulations on your top story.👍

  • Robert Rawson about a month ago

    Brilliant really enjoyed your work ✍️👏💯

  • Gabriela Trofin-Tatárabout a month ago

    Spring the most awsited 🙏💕🥰 Congrats for top story 🥳

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  • Anna about a month ago

    Amazing poem! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Nice Eclipse poem and congrats on TS.

  • Ameer Bibiabout a month ago

    Congratulations 🎉 🎉 for top story Your perseverance is both admirable and motivating. Keep forging ahead!

  • Heather Zieffle about a month ago

    Congratulations on TS! Lovely poem.

  • Oneg In The Arcticabout a month ago

    An incredibly crafted poem. In consistent awe of your work. Congrats on a well deserved Top Story

  • Margaret Brennanabout a month ago

    congratulations on TS. This reminds me of an emergence of life - in any form. Well done.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Wow! The opening imagery was so strong and the lines continued to flourish from there! Great acrostic!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is lovely. Great take on the challenge. Congrats on the TS.

  • Kendall Defoe about a month ago

    This captures a sweet moment and something deeper and richer beneath it all... Top Story indeed... ;)

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