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Tickety-tock
Zenith and over, standstill.
A time doesn’t cease.
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Deasun T. Smyth
I’m a First Nations 17 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.
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So very true 👍
I don't often connect with Haikus (especially since most of them aren't even written correctly), but this one, I did. I think your photo here enhances it because it reinforces that while we try to contain time to the limited construct of our own perception, it stops or slows, for no one. WELL WRITTEN!