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Little blue menace

hiding in plain sight

By Heather HublerPublished 2 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
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Tender flesh throbbing,

Rubbing away all the hurt;

Damn you, blue LEGO!

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Written for the blue haiku challenge.

Just a little funny one this time, or not funny, depending on how you look at it :)

Here is another haiku entry if you'd care to read more:

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  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Hahaha - truth talk! Fin

  • Thayrileabout a year ago

    Nice ๐Ÿ˜Š

  • Oof, I felt that pain! This was amazing!

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  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Brilliant!!!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Hahaha. Love it. Now you got me thinking.

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