Last Day of school
The reason why I'm clumsy is that, I'm always tripping over you!
📝Dear, Cool Kid
Bound by the density
Of my attractiveness to you...
I slipped over my bookbag
In the locker room...
I know that you
Seen me as such a clumsy one...
But honestly, I was only tripping over you!
I'm constantly tripping over you!
At home, I lay in bed
Reminiscing about the way you said, “Are you okay?”
When I fell and hit my head...
My Books fell and you gathered one up!
I still deem the sentiment of your touch-
On my hand,
As you handed over my pen.
I think of you in my Dreams...
I Dream of you being with me...
I fancy,
The way that you wear fresh sneakers...
I admire,
The way you squint your eyes to get a striking picture...
I'm sure you didn't know
That I pleaded for the seat next to you...
I'm a little bit skittish,
So I wrote this letter to you...
That I will deliver...
On the last day of school!
Sincerely,
Me
P.s
Do you like me?
🔲Yes
🔲No
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Comments (45)
I like the end Lonzo. Lovely piece. Congratulations!
Oh the angst we and you all feel at the most inopportune times.
Amazing!
😁
Ah, brings back memories😜Pernoste
Great 👍
This truly reminds me of what is was like to be young and in love.
Yes or No. great ending congratulations
I love the way this flowed. Congrats! 💙 👏
♥️
Congratulations!
Congrats bro it’s Nice
Excellent imagery! Congratulations!
Congratulations on the Top Story!
Love this, congrats on top story!
Such a cute poem!!!❤
Congrats on the top story.
Aww, I could feel all the jitters and innocence in this. How absolutely wonderful!! Congratulations on Top Story! (Funny thing, I almost did one a bit ago that was just a note with do you like me, circle yes or no. I love that you put that part in.)
Such a great poem, Lonzo! Don’t know how I missed this one! You did an amazing job bringing us into that sweet experience- took me back in time:) Congrats on top story!!
This is lovely, Lonzo! Another great piece from you and so glad it was given Top Story! Congratulations!
I'm so pleased to see this on the front page Lonzo ❣❣❣ Congratulations my friend!🎉✨🎇🎆🎈💝💖
This is so well done. Flows perfectly and left me with a smile on my face. Congrats on the top story.
Congrats Lonzo! I enjoyed this one. haha, I especially liked the ending!
Very relatable and thoughtful poetry, romance blasts through the words in a raw way. Congratulations on top story! Yay 😁
Your poetry is so honest, it flows so well. Every time! You are so consistent- Congratulations on Top Story, Lonzo!