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Haiku

By Lindsay SfaraPublished 24 days ago 1 min read
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Photo by Hugues de BUYER-MIMEURE on Unsplash

You see missteps, falls.

I see bright change in the path.

Each step is a gain.

inspirationalStream of ConsciousnessMental HealthHaikuGratitude
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About the Creator

Lindsay Sfara

I'm just a daydreaming nerd writing poetry and fiction about mental health.

Follow my novel journey and more: linktr.ee/lindsaysfara

"Not all those who wander are lost" - J.R.R. Tolkien

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  • L.C. Schäfer19 days ago

    Each step is a gain, I love that!

  • Shirley Belk23 days ago

    beautiful way of looking at life

  • Oh yes, every step is definitely a gain. Loved your Haiku!

  • John Cox24 days ago

    Lovely, thought provoking poem, Lindsay. I love the whimsy of the photo you selected. It’s a great addition to your poem.

  • This feels like a very uplifting poem with an inspiring message. Well done.

  • D.K. Shepard24 days ago

    Absolutely love the middle line and it’s bookended so well with stepping imagery!

  • Well done.

  • Paul Stewart24 days ago

    Truthbomb locked in and dropped by Ms Sfara. Well done!

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