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I’m Nothing

Yet Something

By Moe RadosevichPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
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I’m Nothing
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with insight to the out sight,

perplexed vision sustains joyous delight,

remnants of “what was”,

masquerading as “what is”,

slipping into the empty routine,

savoring the space we fill between,

nights prancing as a stately stud pony,

stars seeking to be,

the one and only,

with dawn, visions again rise high,

searching for silhouettes in the sky,

unicorns and dragons and elephants to see,

making ways for “nothings”,

nothings like me;

yet, my insight remains,

my out sight disdains,

for what I am beyond “nothing”,

knowing I’m really “something”,

derived from “nothing!”

harboring visions of the sky,

in my eye,

flying high,

without reason,

to not comply.

once again the goofy mind is active just being goofy, thank you for reading, hope you enjoyed what nothing can sometimes do, 😳

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

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Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Tiffany Gordon 11 months ago

    Nice work!

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    Well done 👍🙂👌

  • Gina C.11 months ago

    Love the goofiness - amazing poem, Moe! 🤗❤️

  • The title is perfect for me, nice words

  • Grz Colm11 months ago

    An Intriguing poem Moe, with a surreal tone but full of ideas. 😊

  • I gotta agree with Dana. Your goofiness is so deep! Loved your poem!

  • Kalina Bethany11 months ago

    Loved the first two lines :)

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Creative ,& impressive!!! Left a heart ♥

  • Dana Crandell11 months ago

    Pretty profound "goofiness", buddy!

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