Heat Wave
Distracted by the Swelter
Dreamlike haze coats my vision with a surreal veneer,
Images distorted by waves of heat,
Smells, boiling asphalt, and dying grass fill me,
Tickling my nose and I sneeze.
Radiant incandescence, no escape, above, below, all sides too.
Amber blades, once green crunch under my step.
Can't sleep, can't work, can't think, the heat distracts,
The swelter paralyzes,
In its midst, I am ironically frozen,
On and on, day after day, hotter and hotter,
No cooling reprieve, no work getting done, just heat.
About the Creator
Misty Rae
Retired legal eagle, nature love, wife, mother of boys and cats, chef, and trying to learn to play the guitar. I play with paint and words. Living my "middle years" like a teenager and loving every second of it!
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Excellent storytelling
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Comments (27)
Awesome description of how the heat takes a toll. Congrats on your Top Story!
AWESOME I LOVE IT!!!💜💜💜💜💜
Nice thought
Awesome ✨ writing and A Big Congratulations on your Top Story❗🎉❤️
Nice work sis .
Too darn hot!! Well done!! Congratulations on T S too!!!💖💖💕
Yay. Congrats on the TS. Is it still yucky hot?
Very vivid sensory experience! I have know this feeling. Excellent poem!
it is lovely and useful keep going on
Fantastic, Misty! Oh, that heat! 💕🙂
Great job, Misty. Congratulations!
Congratulations on your top story
Congrats on the top story! "The swelter paralyzes indeed". Really good stuff.
Congratulations on Your Top Story ❤️
yes. I spent 8 hours in a truck with no air conditioning this past weekend. It was over 96degrees in the cab. Exactly this.
This is awesome, Misty and congratulations on Top Story!
You are real/natural poet 😍👏Bravo
Awesome job, Misty! There is some really vivid imagery here; I felt that uncomfortable feeling :)
I felt this far too much on my body!! Fantastically done! I so prefer the cool weather... 🫠❣️
Dear Ms. Misty ~ Aka; Legal Eagle, Ret. ~ Time now to 'Work' on your yard - Thanks for the 'Sizzling' Smile - Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -
There is reason we should be taking siestas in the summer season. So true heat is a number one distraction ❤️
Yuck! That's how could this is. You described it so well, I could feel the heat. Great entry, but yuck.
“The swelter paralyzes”…I feel this. Great job.
Here comes Summer! Super well described. Great work, Misty. 🌞
Wonderful job, Misty