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My dear sun
The clouds are in
The day is gray
You are the one
But woods are green
And full of prey
All flesh is weak
All flesh is grass
All flesh is seed
It's hide and seek
For both of us
Then let’s proceed
Tall are the ferns
And soft is bark
So let us roam
Before it turns
Completely dark
And we go home
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Vadim Kagan
I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!
Instagram: @wines_and_rhymes
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Comments (4)
This was absolutely wonderful! Loved your poem so much!
yes, yes...I love this rhythm. Great poem
Beautiful poem! It's been raining here for a few days so it's oddly timely. Great as always!
Oh love this. Love the short and snappy lines and the beautiful flow. Well done, Vadim. I am a big lover of a rainy day (helps make things easier living in Scotland, lol), so appreciate this.