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Fit Enough?

A One-Word Haiku Interrupted by a parenthetical self-doubt

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 15 days ago 1 min read
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Fit Enough?
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Deoxyribo-

(Am-I-really-the-fittest)-

Nucleic acid

______

[Extra statutory words]

Haiku
11

About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. In Life Phase II: Living and writing from a decommissioned church in Hull, MA. (Phase I was New Orleans and everything that entails. Hippocampus, behave!

https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

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  • Hannah Moore9 days ago

    Ha! This is great!

  • Novel Allen14 days ago

    I always did love that word deoxyribonucleic, such a sexy word, rolling off one's tongue. Sorry, didn't mean to get naughty. Love it.

  • Katarzyna Popiel14 days ago

    This haiku has just made my morning. Hats off!

  • Michelle Liew15 days ago

    Clever acrostiku, Gerald.

  • Paul Stewart15 days ago

    what the...did you...just...you did. This is just genius, Gerard! Just...yeah. hats off and round of applause.

  • No idea why this made me think of mitochondria is the powerhouse of the cell hahahaha. Loved your Haiku!

  • John Cox15 days ago

    Screw this three-word sheeeet - supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

  • Kendall Defoe 15 days ago

    Son of a Crick-Watson, this is perfect!

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