Exsanguinate

Superb writing

So beautifully written! Loved it.

Deep and meaningful, just how I like it. Great work with a message starkly and boldly told , but true as can be!

Congratulations on your TS!! Thank you for the Content Warning but it had no impact on me in any distressing way. As so often with your writing I deeply relate. I find relief Pauline ❤️🌸

The imagery is definitely graphic but it drives the point across very well. Sometimes, you just have to say no, you are important too.

The imagery in this piece is incredible. Such a graphic way to capture the feeling of giving out too much of yourself.

very well.

This is so powerful and intriguing! Well done!

I love suspense!

Powerful imagery. Bold and brave, and insightful.

This poem explores the depths of exploitation and sacrifice, presenting a striking image of the cost borne by people who selflessly give to others only to be left completely empty in the process.

Really enjoyed this. Made me envision a woman, wild with distraught on the inside. I also appreciate the use of great words like solipsistic and seriatim. Great!

I wonder, are O+ people empathetic to their death, because they know they can save anyone and everyone? Do they bleed out for strangers and loved ones alike? Now I have something new to ponder when I can't sleep at night. Thank you. Thank you very much...😂

Very powerful!!!!

Great work!!

I love the depth of this. As someone who has/had/struggles to control her savior complex, it's completely accurate to say that there are vampires out there who will bleed people like her dry, until there's nothing left for her to give. I feel like I have been here, metaphorically and physically.... I loved this a lot Dharrsheena. <3 Good job babes!

Congratulations. ❤️

A well deserved top story! Great work!!😘

Great writing!

Good one!

I really enjoy your skillful use of language and your detailed descriptions. This truly is what it feels like to be used by people who just don’t care about anyone but themselves. Good job!

How amazing it is that you can write so elegantly consistently! I have been recommended you, and I can see why! I am fairly new to vocal and attempting to get my name out there via some of the challenges that are currently live. I would greatly appreciate it if you got the chance to read any of my pieces, and gave any form of constructive criticism! No worries if not.

Hey there, just wanna let you know that this needs to have the disclaimer added to the beginning or ending, stating that it was created with the help of AI 😊

This is phenomenal; it really lines up with your bio "glitteringly savage"... that's exactly what this poem gives. I am in awe!

The imagery was disturbing, in a good way. Fabulous work!