They’d tracked Venus as it moved across the sky.
Carrying the god of love,
it drained all warmth from the sun
as they sailed on one more mission
heading south,
to another kind of eclipse.
Into the bay they float through the narrow strait
that opens, womb-like, to the delicate
sands of that great southern land.
Those men in ships,
extra-terrestrials; explorers.
On wary shores, you’re watching
held by the land, weapons at the ready,
just in case things get out of hand.
Men on country,
Kamay crew; circumspect.
Peering through wattle, you stand against tall trees
and ask why the dead return, all white
in strange regalia.
“You’re all dead”, you tell those
restless spirits, but the ghostly deaf,
they come too close.
It begins on a low tide,
as the sun sets, sparkling green and ochre
from the hinterland and the kookaburras
laugh their warning.
A spear splits the air, aimed to scare,
but those ghosts come to life, pistols blazing.
About the Creator
Michèle Nardelli
I write...I suppose, because I always have. Once a journalist, then a PR writer, for the first time I am dabbling in the creative. Now at semi-retirement I am still deciding what might be next.
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