Dear Leonard, Thanks for the trouble you took
With love and homage to Leonard Cohen's Famous Blue Raincoat
Dear Leonard,
It’s three in the arvo, the end of September
I’m writing you now just to tell you I thank you
Australia is burning, but that’s climate change
Wherever we go now the weather is strange
*
And although that you’re gone, we play your songs often,
Though the fact you’re not here for me never softens
*
And when friends come by for a chat or a beer
We stand and salute you with cheers
For the nights that were boozy and dear
and the ones that were starry and clear
*
The last time we saw you you hardly looked older
You pranced on the stage like an overgrown toddler
While the crowd clapped and screamed and we danced till we dropped
Never wanting the night or the music to stop
*
And you treated the world to a slice of your life
With those beautiful words that cut deep as a knife
*
Well, I still see you there on the stage
So well dressed, so cool and so thin
Standing there with that ironic grin
We all send our regards.
*
And what can we tell you, our poet, our singer
What could we possibly say?
I guess that we miss you, I guess that we loved you,
We’re glad that you came in our way
*
Although you’ll never come by now for oranges or tea,
Your songs left the world better, so sleep soft and sleep free
*
Yes, and thanks for the trouble you took
calling out lies,
And those songs that were honest and wise.
*
So, when friends come by for a chat or a beer
We’ll stand and salute you with ‘cheers’.
With thanks for the nights that were dear
Full of music so wise and so clear.
Sincerely, C. Moffat
This poem is a cheeky homage to Leonard Cohen's Famous Blue Raincoat - an epistolary poem/song that is a masterclass in the form. I'm deliberately attempting to follow his rhythms and riff back at him. If you haven't come across Famous Blue Raincoat, track it down and have a listen. The lines
Thanks for the trouble you took
from her eyes
I thought it was there for good
So I never tried
are a gut punch for me every time.
About the Creator
Catherine Moffat
Australian short story writer. Likes to experiment and write across a range of genres. Sometimes dips a toe into the non-fiction and essay writing pool or writes the odd bit of microlit.
Website: https://cathwrite.com/
Twitter: @catemoff
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