No strings attached to my guitar.
I'd like to play you a song about
Life, and love, and death,
And maybe even robots.
But there's
No strings attached to my guitar.
I'd play let's say in F major
I'd take a suspended dominant chord
So that you could feel the suspense of this moment,
And I would sing that you should take a bad song
And make it better.
All these barre chords and lack of practice
Would make my fingers hurt
And maybe even bleed with sweat.
But you would sing along,
and we'd be happy
To have each other
And to be so almost carefree.
Hey, dude
Don't make it bad,
Don't be afraid,
And don't you dare to be so sad.
If only...
If only I had my guitar.
Na na na na na na na...
About the Creator
Andrei Z.
Overthinker.
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SIR DORAN
The fire cracks and spits, offering light and the illusion of solace, but Sir Doran feels no warmth. He sits on a fallen tree and watches the fire as he rests his hands on the pommel of his sword, its blade chipped and worn, more symbolic than functional. Much like Sir Doran himself.
By Aaron Morrison7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (7)
Ah yes, maybe you should sing us that love song about robots. Hooray for Beetles/Beatles of all kinds.
As a Beatles fanatic I loved this! 🪲💕
Whoaaa, this was so creative! You always never fail to amaze me!
The diagram! 🤣 Great job at a unique and quirky poem Andrei. 👏☺️ I loved it. Can you please write more often! 😁 🪲
This is wild because Hey Jude has been stuck in my head ALL DAY. A very serendipitous read for me. Wonderful poem.
(Damn I wanted to be the first to experience this.) This is so cool. I really love the snippets of Hey Jude that come through, especially at the end. Honestly, I loved looking up what C7sus4 sounds like, and it added so much to my favorite part, "I'd take a suspended dominant chord So that you could feel the suspense of this moment, And I would sing that you should take a bad song And make it better." Also, that graphic is awesome. Such a fun poem!!
Tricky chord; nice poem! ;)