Blossoming Thoughts
For Hannah's Community Renga
By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 months ago • 1 min read
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Rain sends my blossoming thoughts
Journeying onwards to home.
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This has been written in response to Hannah Moore's challenge which you can read here as it continues to flower:
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Comments (8)
I kinda missed this one. Very interesting.
This was soooo beautiful! Loved your lines Rach!
Pretty phrasing! Great on its own and as an extension of the renga
Love how this can read as melancholic or upbeat, depending on your frame of mind. Nice one Rachel🤗
Beautiful work Rachel!
Paul’s right. This does stand well on its own. Beautiful!
Gorgeous, thank you so much.
Ohhhh...me like this on its own, let alone part of the renga. Well done, chum-chum-cha-reeeeeee! lol. I'm waking up and just found a whole bunch of Ms Moore so getting my head round it and preparing to Renga.