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Be open to suggestions

… give permission to his means.

By Tim GracePublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Be soothed - mellow is his voice.

Take comfort - pleasant is his tone.

Be secured - anchored to his choice.

Take steps - towards his zone.

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Be open to suggestions…

Give permission to his means…

Be prone to his impressions…

Give way to setting scenes…

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Be willing - under his cajole.

Rest aside - reason and debate.

Be content - consent to his control,

Rest easy - in this deeply altered state.

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He has you in a sleep-filled trance,

exposed to his control of circumstance.

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© Tim Grace, 21 February 2011

(Revised: 16 October 2022)

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About the Creator

Tim Grace

A first impression has a lasting effect - it makes a notable difference. In a subtle way that’s who I am as a poet. A ‘first impression’ looking for the gentle ‘twist’ that draws attention to a novel observation.

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