Battlefield
point of no return
Torn at the edges
Of our distant rubicon
Maddened and Yellowed
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Notes from the Author:
This poem reflects a personal relationship. It was inspired by a song by The Bravery called “The Ocean,” off the 2007 album, “The Sun and the Moon.” It’s one of my favourite songs of all time, taking me back to my last year of high school when I was 16. It’s worth mentioning this is a fantastic and seamless album all the way through.
If you enjoyed this piece, and could relate your own relationship(s) to it, you might relate to this one too:
About the Creator
Allie Bickerton
She / Her - Canada
I spent most of my life immersed in visual arts and I neglected my literacy.
Nurturing harboured emotions and poetic thoughts I’ve stashed within.
Thank you for being here! 💕
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Nice
This was so beautiful!